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The Big Fight

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Do you like my fic?

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It's pretty good
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It's ok, you need to improve it
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The Big Fight

Postby Dylan0513 » Wed Oct 26, 2005 8:09 pm

It's in it's 14th chapter and I despritly need reviws. Though the chapters are short, if I get reviews, there'll be a lot of chapters.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2264175/1/

Current chapter: Chapter 14
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Postby Dylan0513 » Sun Oct 30, 2005 10:19 pm

um *cough*bump*cough*
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Postby captainratchet » Mon Oct 31, 2005 11:05 pm

interesting.
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Postby Odd22 » Mon Nov 07, 2005 6:27 pm

I cnas tell this is an old one because i remeber i read it before way back when it is pretty good. u should make the last chapie huge cuz of all ur short ones

sorry
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Postby Odd22 » Tue Nov 08, 2005 5:14 pm

i delete this one (onde i find out how)
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Postby Star Way » Tue Nov 08, 2005 5:25 pm

Enough with the double posting, guys... It's irritating.
Don't bother sending me messages or anything, I'm not in charge of the site anymore.

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Postby Odd22 » Tue Nov 08, 2005 9:53 pm

I am waiting for this sucker to be updated

Check out the stories i pout on here
it is where it says this is by my friend
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Postby Dylan0513 » Tue Nov 08, 2005 11:08 pm

Ok, I'll update when I can. Probably not until Firday :whatever:
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Postby Odd22 » Wed Nov 09, 2005 6:22 pm

hey dylan if u wanna read mine it is called greatest desires it is very bad though
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Postby Star Way » Wed Nov 09, 2005 6:23 pm

It's not nice to advertise your fic on someone else's thread... so please don't. :P
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Postby Odd22 » Wed Nov 09, 2005 9:01 pm

sorry it is really bad anyway but i will remember that next time and 1 question ypu sare like a god every post i am at u are also at :umm:
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Postby Lyoko SA80 » Sun Nov 13, 2005 3:39 pm

8) The topic is a good topic .Ulrick and Yumi feels could be shown etc As yumi changed at me my heart stop .The anger in her face made me freeze my heart stop when I felt a pain come to my face then blackness.Yumi veiw,The friend I knew had bloken my trust and I have no feels as I changed .Anger grew my muscles teird and my fist make contract with his face.What have i done.Don't woulding I not good at this fan fiction you do have a grift they I repest that . ;)
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Postby MY85 » Sun Nov 13, 2005 5:50 pm

odd22 wrote:sorry it is really bad anyway but i will remember that next time and 1 question ypu sare like a god every post i am at u are also at :umm:


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Postby Odd22 » Sun Nov 13, 2005 5:50 pm

wow i thought u were rodri for a second (drum lyoko) any eway i cant wait for next chappie

ps molonthic baby has a new chappie
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Postby Dylan0513 » Sun Nov 13, 2005 6:38 pm

Lol, I thought you said it was bad.
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Postby Odd22 » Sun Nov 13, 2005 9:46 pm

i never said it was bad
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Postby Dylan0513 » Sun Nov 13, 2005 9:47 pm

odd22 wrote:sorry it is really bad anyway but i will remember that next time and 1 question ypu sare like a god every post i am at u are also at :umm:


Oh! You meant the advertisment!
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Postby DarkestSoul X21 » Sun Nov 13, 2005 10:30 pm

good job, i want to read the next chapter
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Postby Dylan0513 » Sun Nov 13, 2005 10:32 pm

I'll try to have the next chapter up by tommorow, and hopefully the one after that by Wednesday becuase they're so short.
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Postby Lyoko SA80 » Mon Nov 14, 2005 1:30 pm

:*D Here that I start my know fan fiction mate thanks for the inspiration. :D I only come with ideas after read you topic nice one mate you help me I can't wait for the next one to come ;)
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Postby Lyoko SA80 » Mon Nov 14, 2005 1:31 pm

:*D Here that I start my know fan fiction mate thanks for the inspiration. :D I only come with ideas after read you topic nice one mate you help me I can't wait for the next one to come ;)
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Postby Lyoko SA80 » Mon Nov 14, 2005 1:34 pm

:*D Here that I start my know fan fiction mate thanks for the inspiration. :D I only come with ideas after read you topic nice one mate you help me I can't wait for the next one to come ;) How do you get fan fiction on Fan Fiction.net
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Postby Lyoko SA80 » Mon Nov 14, 2005 1:34 pm

:*D Here that I start my know fan fiction mate thanks for the inspiration. :D I only come with ideas after read you topic nice one mate you help me I can't wait for the next one to come ;) How do you get fan fiction on Fan Fiction.net.
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Postby Lyoko SA80 » Mon Nov 14, 2005 1:42 pm

:*D Here that I start my know fan fiction mate thanks for the inspiration. :D I only come with ideas after read you topic nice one mate you help me I can't wait for the next one to come ;) How do you get fan fiction on Fan Fiction.net.
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Postby Dylan0513 » Mon Nov 14, 2005 4:31 pm

You should work on your grammer, lol.

First you need to make an account.
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