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So, after a long stretch of time of entirely avoiding writing anything with a beginning and an end, I took an idea that was developing quickly and decided to put it to paper before it ran away. It's not Five, but I can assure you it's something that's gotten my creative juices flowing sideways.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6119537/1/Ego

The FF.net summary:
"When XANA gains access to the mental data stored on the supercomputer, he is able to create a series of monsters unlike anything the Lyoko Warriors have ever faced - or ever wanted to face."

And that's all I have to say. G'bye.

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Stonecreek, I didn't give this to you because I know you're busy, but if you want to beta/disapprove of it, by all means.

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Carth wrote:
So, after a long stretch of time of entirely avoiding writing anything with a beginning and an end, I took an idea that was developing quickly and decided to put it to paper before it ran away. It's not Five, but I can assure you it's something that's gotten my creative juices flowing sideways.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6119537/1/Ego

The FF.net summary:
"When XANA gains access to the mental data stored on the supercomputer, he is able to create a series of monsters unlike anything the Lyoko Warriors have ever faced - or ever wanted to face."

And that's all I have to say. G'bye.

Sig most likely forthcoming.

Stonecreek, I didn't give this to you because I know you're busy, but if you want to beta/disapprove of it, by all means.


Will read it later. I have sorta been out of love with CL fandom lately. Believe it or not, Inuyasha has piqued my interest again after four some-odd years away from the fandom. Lotta good fanfics been written since I last perused the category. Who knows what fandom I'll bounce to next?

But yes, I will get to this story, and possibly even do beta on it. Just not tonight, 'cause it's gonna be a long one at work.

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Carth wrote:
So, after a long stretch of time of entirely avoiding writing anything with a beginning and an end, I took an idea that was developing quickly and decided to put it to paper before it ran away. It's not Five, but I can assure you it's something that's gotten my creative juices flowing sideways.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6119537/1/Ego

The FF.net summary:
"When XANA gains access to the mental data stored on the supercomputer, he is able to create a series of monsters unlike anything the Lyoko Warriors have ever faced - or ever wanted to face."

And that's all I have to say. G'bye.

Sig most likely forthcoming.

Stonecreek, I didn't give this to you because I know you're busy, but if you want to beta/disapprove of it, by all means.


Will read it later. I have sorta been out of love with CL fandom lately. Believe it or not, Inuyasha has piqued my interest again after four some-odd years away from the fandom. Lotta good fanfics been written since I last perused the category. Who knows what fandom I'll bounce to next?

But yes, I will get to this story, and possibly even do beta on it. Just not tonight, 'cause it's gonna be a long one at work.


Hey, don't force yourself to work on it if you're not feeling the fandom! I know how attention bouncing is - enjoy Inuyasha while you're focused on it, and then come back to CL in due time. Or summat else inspirational like.

But if you did at least read it i would be happy C:

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I read it earlier today and I think it's an excellent start. I'll be looking forward to more

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I have read it now (sorry, no time to beta at all), and I really liked all the dialogue/banter in the first chapter. I'm gonna withhold judgement on the plottty part until the plot acutally goes somewhere other than teasing the reader.

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I have read it now (sorry, no time to beta at all), and I really liked all the dialogue/banter in the first chapter. I'm gonna withhold judgement on the plottty part until the plot acutally goes somewhere other than teasing the reader.


YAY I HAVE A STONECREEK SEAL OF APPROVAL!

I have started on Chapter 2; just gotten a little stuck trying not to have Odd's issues overtake the whole chapter. 8/

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I have read it now (sorry, no time to beta at all), and I really liked all the dialogue/banter in the first chapter. I'm gonna withhold judgement on the plottty part until the plot acutally goes somewhere other than teasing the reader.


YAY I HAVE A STONECREEK SEAL OF APPROVAL!

I have started on Chapter 2; just gotten a little stuck trying not to have Odd's issues overtake the whole chapter. 8/


Bear in mind that Odd's issues usually make for entertaining reading. Just saying...

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Hmm... interesting...

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Good news, everyone! I did finally finish Chapter 2, but due to circumstances beyond my control (including my own laziness) it would be best if I published it on Friday, because otherwise it would clearly be a steaming wreck. Sorry. D:

EDIT: I am impatient, so it's going up now. I'll get a beta'd version up Friday if any major changes need to be made.

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It's pretty interesting. The end is oddly reminiscent of Pick On Yumi week

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I have noticed that, true to CL form, you're picking on Yumi. :P

This is amazing, Carth. Allow me to asdf for a moment.

ASDFKDJALSJDAKSJLDASDASLDKJ

*clears throat* Alright then. Anyway, I love this. I love everything about it. Furthermore, I propose the forum motto be changed to "Lyoko Freak: Full of Sky Water." Because because. I love how you can not only take us for a ride on the roller coaster of unresolved sexual tension that is Code Lyoko, and throw in CREEPY VOICES and manage to make it work in AWESOME SYNERGY OF AWESOME.

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Huh, guess I neglected to drop in here and say this yet, so:

Carth, this is pretty good. Please continue writing it. Try not to take too long Winking

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Look what a doof I am, I took too long. D8 I can assure you that the chapter is 3/4ths done, it's the last 4th that's driving me mad. I've come back to it, though, and I promise not to take too horribly long! Love!

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THE CHAPTER IS UP. And I've fixed some errors in Chapter 2 and the Interlude.

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This chapter is strange and wonderful. Everybody gets to go down their own horrible (or in Jeremy's case kind of sweet but then creepy) rabbit hole, and I like it. Well, Odd and Ulrich not as much yet either, but I'm sure you have plans.

Insert generic statement: Please add more when you find the time, Carth.

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This is the most psychedelic CL fanfic I've ever read. Your writing always amazes me, you're just one of the best I know. ^^
I so can't wait what is going to happen next!

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