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Categories: Seasons > Season 1, Seasons > Season 2, Seasons > Season 3 Characters: Jeremie Belpois
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Comedy, Drama, General, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed: No Word count: 1023 Read Count: 6502
Date: Sep 13, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Rage
A very interesting start, if it is a start.
Jeremie seems to have quite a few problems bottled up inside. That could be very plausible.
If this is the beginning of the story, I look forward to reading more. If not, consider adding to it.
Categories: Seasons > Season 3 Characters: Aelita Hopper, Jeremie Belpois, Odd Della Robbia, Ulrich Stern, Yumi Ishiyama
Genres: General
Warnings: None
Series: Testing The Love Of JeremieXAelita, Failing
Chapters: 11
Completed: Yes Word count: 5435 Read Count: 36585
Date: Oct 02, 2006 Title: Chapter 4: Will He?
I'm liking it so far...
The only thing I'd watch out for is using another word that sounds the same as the word you're really thinking of, like "your" instead of "you're" when you mean "you are." It's a mistake I've seen in a lot of fanfics; and it's something a spell checker will not necessarily catch.
Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Super great!!! I'll check or it in the future!! Thanks for da help!
Categories: Seasons > Season 2 Characters: Ulrich Stern
Genres: Action/Adventure, Comedy, General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes Word count: 379 Read Count: 1377
Date: Oct 08, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Kiwi's Adventure
Cute!
Author's Response: Thanks. I try my best, and who can resist a Kiwi-on-Lyoko adventure? I mean really (*giggle*)
The first part of Alternate Season 4. Dealing with the events of "Final Round" The gang is worn down to nothing, and clinging to what they can.
(As a historical note, this was written pretty much the night of the S3 ender.)
Categories: Seasons Characters: Aelita Hopper, Jeremie Belpois, Odd Della Robbia, Ulrich Stern, Yumi Ishiyama
Genres: Angst, Drama
Warnings: None
Series: Alternate Season 4
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes Word count: 2646 Read Count: 1172
Date: Oct 24, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Recovery
Excellent Story! Very plausible!
Author's Response: I like to think so, thanks for the review.
Categories: Seasons > Season 3 Characters: Jeremie Belpois
Genres: General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes Word count: 599 Read Count: 1713
Date: Feb 18, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Good Story! I think Jeremie would do something like that, given the circumstances.
Categories: Ships > Other Characters: Aelita Hopper, Jeremie Belpois, Odd Della Robbia, Ulrich Stern, Yumi Ishiyama
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed: Yes Word count: 1509 Read Count: 5355
Date: Apr 14, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
It seems short. It doesn't read like it's finished yet.
What happens on the date? Is this a brief fling, or is Aelita really smitten by this guy? Either way, what happens next?
Add a little more to the story, let us know where it leads the characters to, for better or worse.
Categories: Ships > Ulrich and Yumi Characters: Ulrich Stern, Yumi Ishiyama
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: Music and Lyrics
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes Word count: 1007 Read Count: 1275
Date: Apr 19, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Irreplaceable
A little more backstory would be interesting.
Did Yumi and Ulrich date before, and what happened to them? How long were Yumi & William together before he started stepping out on her?
Oh, and watch the spelling demons...
Categories: Ships > Jeremie and Aelita, Ships > Ulrich and Yumi, Seasons > Post-Season 3, Ships > Other Characters: Aelita Hopper, Yumi Ishiyama
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Mystery, Suspense, Thriller
Warnings: None
Series: Gret Escpe
Chapters: 9
Completed: Yes Word count: 3832 Read Count: 29663
Date: Feb 23, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Good story so far.
Author's Response: Thanks! The next chaptr shold be filld with acten...