Reviews For Construction Project
Reviewer: Sithking Zero Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 09, 2009 11:44 PM Title: Xana's plan
Date: Mar 09, 2009 11:44 PM Title: Xana's plan
Hmmm.... good chapters, but they are a little short and could stand to be fleshed out more.
Reviewer: LyokoGirl Signed 
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Date: Nov 29, 2006 11:26 AM Title: Things get worse
[Report This]Date: Nov 29, 2006 11:26 AM Title: Things get worse
Interesting but you need to put space between your sentences that are in quotation marks. That will make things easier to read. Otherwise a great story!
Author's Response: Thanks! I was trying to put spaces when i made it but didn't have time.