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Reviewer: Aelita Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 02, 2008 04:33 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow, this was great! You made one grammar mistake, when Hiroki said 'Was that you're boyfriend, Ulrich?' it should be 'Was that your boyfriend, Ulrich?' because it's a possessive instead of a contraction.

Otherwise, great! 10/10.

Reviewer: metrunui1 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 26, 2006 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is a pritty good story, though i think that you could have had more to it. It shows the "inner workings" of Yumi that she oftan doesnt show.

All Total you recieve a 7/10 for this story

Reviewer: Izzeban Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 04, 2006 05:19 PM Title: Chapter 1

I like this fic because it really stays in touch with Yumi's character throughout. The only negative comment I have is that, for a oneshot, it could have ben a bit longer, but otherwise, this is great reading material, and keep up the good work.

Reviewer: lyoko101 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 04, 2006 04:29 PM Title: Chapter 1

interesting. I like it!

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