Reviews For What the gang will do..
Reviewer: Stonecreek Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 11, 2006 03:46 PM Title: Chapter 2
Date: Oct 11, 2006 03:46 PM Title: Chapter 2
You have a storyline going, but you don't need to explain everything in such exacting detail. Nor do you need everyone to say the same thing on a seperate line. Just have them all say the same thing, as a group. I like your ideas, but the technique is just so flawed. Read a book on writing. You can do better.