Date: May 09, 2007 12:19 PM Title: Yumi
Well, that fic was both interesting and entertaining. You could have been a bit more specific about who was talking, and I didn't completely understand the end of Chapter 4, but overall I think it was good. Keep it up! 6/10.
Date: Oct 28, 2006 04:39 PM Title: Ulrich
A good story, but may I say that in a very new episode Odd turns out to be a new student himself and just barely meets Ulrich. Plus, Jeremie and Ulrich don't really know each other at first, so can you change that a bit? I really do think that the sarcasm on jeremie's side really cracked me up.
Date: Oct 04, 2006 08:29 PM Title: Jeremie's life
*Stares with impossible silent squeal* Too. Adorable. It's the total opposite of how I think Jeremie's home life was/is but it's too cute since it's Jeremie. *Goes to dip face in cool water from blush*