Reviews For The Return of Xana
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Reviewer: 5CarthageRocks Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 31, 2008 03:05 AM Title: Pain and Victory

Hmm...

Well as you said, it is rather short. But the plot comes across rather nicely; all you have to work on is adding detail. Good job. :)

(Having trouble remembering if I've read this before...x_x)

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