Date: Mar 02, 2009 09:21 PM Title: Chapter 4 Yahooooo!
Not a bad story, the plot is something I actually thought up a while back. Great minds think alike, eh?
Lots of spelling and grammer mistakes, as well. Not to mention, things jump around a lot. For example, the alternate Sissi's gang immiediately assume that he's an alternate Odd and not their own Odd playing a trick on them. Not only that, but original Odd doesn't even suspect that it's a XANA attack. The characters make leaps in judgement that aren't really in character.
Author's Response: Oui, I know about the grammer and spelling. Cut me some slack, huh? Like I tould the first guy, this was the first story I did in eanglish. And oui, now that I read it over and over it doesn't realy go into charater. Thanks for the review! ^_^
Date: Aug 10, 2008 09:09 PM Title: Chapter 1 The Fight
I rather like the story's idea, and the plot, but the grammer I find atrocious. It'd be great otherwise...
Author's Response: Oui, oui. Yah, I know about the grammer. Cut me some slack, hu? This was one of the first ones in english.
[Report This]Date: May 25, 2008 06:20 AM Title: Chapter 4 Yahooooo!
hahahah, poor herve, man i love the original odd, and i love this fic, quick yet cool, welll done!!!
Author's Response: Thanks, I don't normaly write it and put it on the web the same day, but I thought it was good too. ^_^