Reviews For Silhoette of a Genius
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Reviewer: trixter 93 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 01, 2008 06:36 AM Title: The Prospect of Drowing

wow, another masterpiece absoloute perfection, deep too, im soo sick somtimes of people making jeremy the all around good guy, thnx, this fic mysteriously brings me relief

Reviewer: RockyB Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 18, 2006 09:25 PM Title: God Complex

A GOD COMPLEX! HAHAHA! Man, this should be something. Short but good!

Reviewer: Stonecreek Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 13, 2006 08:09 AM Title: Rage

First of all, I like the direction you took with this.  A Jeremie brooding over something other than Aelita is something the fandom doesn't see enough of.  However, it is hard to notice the story when the grammatical errors are so prevelant.  Mainly it's tense shifts, but Albert Einstein was misspelled.  The narrative structure needs work, but your characterizations are spot -on, even if Jeremie waxes too melodramatic at times.  You have talent, now hone it to a sharp blade.

Reviewer: 2remember Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 13, 2006 06:54 AM Title: Rage

A very interesting start, if it is a start.

 Jeremie seems to have quite a few problems bottled up inside. That could be very plausible.

If this is the beginning of the story, I look forward to reading more. If not, consider adding to it. 

Reviewer: Lani Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 12, 2006 09:18 PM Title: Rage

I really liked this one!! You showed a different side of Jeremie, and yet kept him 'Jeremie'... <3 Good job~~!

Reviewer: RockyB Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 12, 2006 07:19 PM Title: Rage

That was intense.....

Reviewer: Rudger Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 12, 2006 06:35 PM Title: Rage

fantastic. purely fantastic

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