Date: Dec 03, 2007 01:15 AM Title: Chapter 1
There were a few too many details left out in this story, such as what ''the attack'' was, or what made the Burakumin unclean. Good idea, but you could have done so much more, like Yumi saving the rest of the Burakumin or something of that sort.
Date: Jun 18, 2007 07:50 PM Title: Chapter 1
Cool story! I should have read it sooner.(By the way this is a prime example of what I was talking about, Yumi's mom can't survive at all.I wouldn't be suprised if she died in the show!)
Author's Response: Thanx! I had alot of help with it and I had to do alot of research about Japanese religion to make this as good as I could for all you LYOKO fans.