Reviews For Power Grab
Reviewer: QuinSeparable Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 04, 2007 05:03 PM Title: Chapter 1
Date: Apr 04, 2007 05:03 PM Title: Chapter 1
I like the reasons that you gave for William...nice job and it seems to fit his character.
One thing you might want to do is do some proofreading before uploading. There are quite a bit of typos in the story.
Reviewer: Wolf Tears Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 22, 2007 07:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
Date: Jan 22, 2007 07:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
Woah. That's... depressing. Really, really depressing. I have a twisted mind and I like depressing stuff,, though, so that's okay. :)
I like it-I don't think it needs anything else, really. It's great as is. *claps*
I feel sorry for William now...