Reviews For Routine
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Reviewer: Star Way Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 05, 2006 09:23 AM Title: Routine

Wow, awesome fic! (Ooh, first time I wrote that, I made a typo and thus it became a very different sentence. xDD) But, yeah, I really like the way it's written... very poetic. I also like the way you capture the emotion so well; you give detail, but keep things as vague as they should be at the same time. It's a delicate balance, and you really know what you're doing. :) As for your question about whether or not slash is allowed here, I'm not 100% sure (ultimately the decision is Vchat's, but he's cool so, ehh). When he started this place, he said lemon was okay (for one thing), so I doubt this is a problem. (I'm into yaoi myself, so I certainly don't mind. ^^) Once again, great fic! Keep writing 'em! :D

Reviewer: RockyB Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 03, 2006 06:57 PM Title: Routine

Woah! Ulrich likes Yumi yet lusts over Odd and then punishes himself by cutting himself? Can't say i've heard that before. Really good! It might do you some good to make a chapter-fic sequel of this one-shot! The idea is stuck in my head now! Great set-up! i love how you set it up in third-person, but didn't mention any names, but you still know exactly who is who! Perfect, absolutly perfect! Best story i've read so far on this site you shouldn't give up on this set-up, do a few more things with it! Oh and in response to your author note(shown above the story,of course), you should be proud of this story, I'd be fucking-damn proud myself, if i wrote this!!! Once again, it was freaking perfect!I give it on a scale of 1to 10 a...24 even if the rating i give is a 10! It 's only because that's the highest number you can give for a story, but i'm sticking with my..24!

Reviewer: Stonecreek Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 01, 2006 08:57 AM Title: Routine

I have never liked the inclusion of cutting in fanfics.  It seems so...foriegn.  But you write well (no stupid grammatical errors, etc.), so I overlook this.  It is a solid one-shot.  Nice one.

Reviewer: Rudger Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 31, 2006 09:06 PM Title: Routine

Exelent. It has been one of my favorites since you first posted it.

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