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Reviewer: trixter 93 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 31, 2008 01:14 AM Title: Poems

nice, what if ulrich finds the scrapbook, that would be......... like when he found her diary i guess

Reviewer: trixter 93 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 31, 2008 01:13 AM Title: Poems

wow, ulrich and his writer block awesome

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Date: Jan 31, 2008 01:11 AM Title: Heart Broken

great, the nurse just said kiddies,right lol please finish its great so far

Reviewer: trixter 93 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 31, 2008 12:48 AM Title: How Much Is Too Much?

yayayayayayay, aelitas alive, uxy is stil on and odd is sti good ole odd, perfect story, perfect score

Reviewer: trixter 93 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 31, 2008 12:02 AM Title: How Much Is Too Much?

ahhhshe smiled, nut why, why did yumi and ulrich broke up, i guess illjust ahve to read on, ohh wel, thanks heaps, kiw, im adding you to my favs

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Date: Jan 30, 2008 03:00 AM Title: Years Go on

ahhhhh, no aelita, dont believe kim, jer bear looooves you

Reviewer: aelita2468 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 24, 2007 03:01 AM Title: Heart Broken

One word: WOW!!!!!

 

 

ADD MORE CHAPTERS!!!!!! 

Reviewer: GreenEarthPFC Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 22, 2007 01:02 AM Title: Heart Broken

You should update this, homes, this is a great story.

Reviewer: GarageKid Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 10, 2007 06:41 PM Title: Years Go on

I don't mean to be pushy, I just want to know if you would let me add this fic to my new website, freewebs.com/everstray, I wont take credit for it I promise. But if you don't want me to add it, just say so. I wont add it until you responed.

Reviewer: mirawriter Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 19, 2007 11:58 AM Title: Heart Broken

OMG! SO awesome! PLEASE update! Lol... 'now all we need is a lightning bolt to strike a character'... great story!

Reviewer: GarageKid Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 24, 2007 05:35 PM Title: Heart Broken

OMG!

Reviewer: CLfan Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 10, 2007 04:12 PM Title: How Much Is Too Much?

That was so good! You should get an award or something for it.(if i had one i'd send it in the mail) I don't like Jason all that much though, but I'm a BIG AelitaxJeremie fan.

Reviewer: GarageKid Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 08, 2007 07:36 PM Title: How Much Is Too Much?

That was really good. I would say, one of your best stories.

Reviewer: oddlyoko1 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 14, 2007 07:11 PM Title: How Much Is Too Much?

Get to the next chapter already!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: CLfan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 13, 2006 10:14 AM Title: How Much Is Too Much?

Awesome chapter I'll have to read the second one when you finish.

Reviewer: Kougre223 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 30, 2006 05:22 PM Title: Poems

I love YxU !! Awesome!

Reviewer: lyoko101 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 17, 2006 02:19 PM Title: Years Go on

Jeremie and Aelita forever! Make the two togehter again!



Author's Response: I just may..

Reviewer: Aqua Lyokia Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 13, 2006 02:16 PM Title: Years Go on

Wow, I just love the twists and turns your story takes! The cliff hangers of the relationship of JA always changing, looks good! I can only hope to see more!


Author's Response:

Thanks so much.  I feel so bad I didn't update in almost a month or over..I forget.. XD

Reviewer: metrunui1 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 03, 2006 07:42 AM Title: Years Go on

good job so far, i personaly think that you have Aelita a little too outgoing. But that is probibly just me, good job!


Author's Response: Thanks, and please excuse it, because I don't really know how to play Aelita really well...

Reviewer: 2remember Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 02, 2006 04:13 PM Title: Years Go on

I'm liking it so far...

The only thing I'd watch out for is using another word that sounds the same as the word you're really thinking of, like "your" instead of "you're" when you mean "you are." It's a mistake I've seen in a lot of fanfics; and it's something a spell checker will not necessarily catch.

Keep up the good work! 



Author's Response: Super great!!! I'll check or it in the future!! Thanks for da help!

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