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Postby Carth » Wed Jul 07, 2010 2:07 pm

So, after a long stretch of time of entirely avoiding writing anything with a beginning and an end, I took an idea that was developing quickly and decided to put it to paper before it ran away. It's not Five, but I can assure you it's something that's gotten my creative juices flowing sideways.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6119537/1/Ego

The FF.net summary:
"When XANA gains access to the mental data stored on the supercomputer, he is able to create a series of monsters unlike anything the Lyoko Warriors have ever faced - or ever wanted to face."

And that's all I have to say. G'bye.

Sig most likely forthcoming.

Stonecreek, I didn't give this to you because I know you're busy, but if you want to beta/disapprove of it, by all means.
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Re: Ego

Postby Stonecreek » Wed Jul 07, 2010 7:23 pm

Carth wrote:So, after a long stretch of time of entirely avoiding writing anything with a beginning and an end, I took an idea that was developing quickly and decided to put it to paper before it ran away. It's not Five, but I can assure you it's something that's gotten my creative juices flowing sideways.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6119537/1/Ego

The FF.net summary:
"When XANA gains access to the mental data stored on the supercomputer, he is able to create a series of monsters unlike anything the Lyoko Warriors have ever faced - or ever wanted to face."

And that's all I have to say. G'bye.

Sig most likely forthcoming.

Stonecreek, I didn't give this to you because I know you're busy, but if you want to beta/disapprove of it, by all means.


Will read it later. I have sorta been out of love with CL fandom lately. Believe it or not, Inuyasha has piqued my interest again after four some-odd years away from the fandom. Lotta good fanfics been written since I last perused the category. Who knows what fandom I'll bounce to next?

But yes, I will get to this story, and possibly even do beta on it. Just not tonight, 'cause it's gonna be a long one at work.
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Re: Ego

Postby Carth » Wed Jul 07, 2010 7:35 pm

Stonecreek wrote:
Carth wrote:So, after a long stretch of time of entirely avoiding writing anything with a beginning and an end, I took an idea that was developing quickly and decided to put it to paper before it ran away. It's not Five, but I can assure you it's something that's gotten my creative juices flowing sideways.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6119537/1/Ego

The FF.net summary:
"When XANA gains access to the mental data stored on the supercomputer, he is able to create a series of monsters unlike anything the Lyoko Warriors have ever faced - or ever wanted to face."

And that's all I have to say. G'bye.

Sig most likely forthcoming.

Stonecreek, I didn't give this to you because I know you're busy, but if you want to beta/disapprove of it, by all means.


Will read it later. I have sorta been out of love with CL fandom lately. Believe it or not, Inuyasha has piqued my interest again after four some-odd years away from the fandom. Lotta good fanfics been written since I last perused the category. Who knows what fandom I'll bounce to next?

But yes, I will get to this story, and possibly even do beta on it. Just not tonight, 'cause it's gonna be a long one at work.


Hey, don't force yourself to work on it if you're not feeling the fandom! I know how attention bouncing is - enjoy Inuyasha while you're focused on it, and then come back to CL in due time. Or summat else inspirational like.

But if you did at least read it i would be happy C:
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Postby green » Wed Jul 07, 2010 9:36 pm

I read it earlier today and I think it's an excellent start. I'll be looking forward to more
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Postby Stonecreek » Mon Jul 12, 2010 5:07 pm

I have read it now (sorry, no time to beta at all), and I really liked all the dialogue/banter in the first chapter. I'm gonna withhold judgement on the plottty part until the plot acutally goes somewhere other than teasing the reader.
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YDV wrote:Well you see, the amount of time we didn't normally hang around BKO is kind of like potential energy, and then when we all finally came back at the same time it's like letting loose a catapult. 8D

It's all very scientifical. |D


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Postby Carth » Mon Jul 12, 2010 5:24 pm

Stonecreek wrote:I have read it now (sorry, no time to beta at all), and I really liked all the dialogue/banter in the first chapter. I'm gonna withhold judgement on the plottty part until the plot acutally goes somewhere other than teasing the reader.


YAY I HAVE A STONECREEK SEAL OF APPROVAL!

I have started on Chapter 2; just gotten a little stuck trying not to have Odd's issues overtake the whole chapter. 8/
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Postby Stonecreek » Mon Jul 12, 2010 9:04 pm

Carth wrote:
Stonecreek wrote:I have read it now (sorry, no time to beta at all), and I really liked all the dialogue/banter in the first chapter. I'm gonna withhold judgement on the plottty part until the plot acutally goes somewhere other than teasing the reader.


YAY I HAVE A STONECREEK SEAL OF APPROVAL!

I have started on Chapter 2; just gotten a little stuck trying not to have Odd's issues overtake the whole chapter. 8/


Bear in mind that Odd's issues usually make for entertaining reading. Just saying...
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YDV wrote:Well you see, the amount of time we didn't normally hang around BKO is kind of like potential energy, and then when we all finally came back at the same time it's like letting loose a catapult. 8D

It's all very scientifical. |D


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Postby Tangent128 » Fri Jul 16, 2010 11:37 pm

Hmm... interesting...
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Postby Carth » Wed Jul 21, 2010 10:45 pm

Good news, everyone! I did finally finish Chapter 2, but due to circumstances beyond my control (including my own laziness) it would be best if I published it on Friday, because otherwise it would clearly be a steaming wreck. Sorry. D:

EDIT: I am impatient, so it's going up now. I'll get a beta'd version up Friday if any major changes need to be made.
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Postby xiaozanghou » Thu Jul 22, 2010 1:32 am

It's pretty interesting. The end is oddly reminiscent of Pick On Yumi week :P
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Postby SilverPrince » Thu Jul 22, 2010 1:39 am

I have noticed that, true to CL form, you're picking on Yumi. :P

This is amazing, Carth. Allow me to asdf for a moment.

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*clears throat* Alright then. Anyway, I love this. I love everything about it. Furthermore, I propose the forum motto be changed to "Lyoko Freak: Full of Sky Water." Because because. I love how you can not only take us for a ride on the roller coaster of unresolved sexual tension that is Code Lyoko, and throw in CREEPY VOICES and manage to make it work in AWESOME SYNERGY OF AWESOME.
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Postby AmericanLyokoTeam » Sun Jul 25, 2010 4:39 pm

Huh, guess I neglected to drop in here and say this yet, so:

Carth, this is pretty good. Please continue writing it. Try not to take too long ;)
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Postby Carth » Fri Sep 03, 2010 8:40 am

Look what a doof I am, I took too long. D8 I can assure you that the chapter is 3/4ths done, it's the last 4th that's driving me mad. I've come back to it, though, and I promise not to take too horribly long! <3
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Postby Carth » Sat Sep 04, 2010 11:26 pm

THE CHAPTER IS UP. And I've fixed some errors in Chapter 2 and the Interlude.
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Postby AmericanLyokoTeam » Sun Sep 05, 2010 12:34 am

This chapter is strange and wonderful. Everybody gets to go down their own horrible (or in Jeremy's case kind of sweet but then creepy) rabbit hole, and I like it. Well, Odd and Ulrich not as much yet either, but I'm sure you have plans.

Insert generic statement: Please add more when you find the time, Carth.
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Postby desincarnation » Sun Sep 05, 2010 6:58 am

This is the most psychedelic CL fanfic I've ever read. Your writing always amazes me, you're just one of the best I know. ^^
I so can't wait what is going to happen next!
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Postby JesusFreak » Fri Sep 10, 2010 7:46 pm

Oh gosh, this fic was just like an episode of the show!
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