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Lyoko! The Musical

Postby Carth » Thu Dec 31, 2009 11:04 am

Before I can tell you this story I have to tell you this one. Last Saturday afternoon I was utterly bored in the car ride to my grandma's, and, for some reason, the idea to write a musical adaptation of CL popped into my mind. I like CL, and I like musicals, so I decided to run with it. Yes, instead of struggling through a fic I've been planning for two years, I easily wrote something I'd only had an idea about for an hour. Then again, most of the plot is written for me...but I digress.

It isn't complete, of course. If Stoney or anyone else wants to beta it, go ahead. Feel free to point out flaws or syllable discrepancies. As it is now, the plot only covers the prologue and first season. Many changes have been made- William and Hiroki are there from the beginning, for one, and there are references to Franz Hopper earlier than there should be. Simple enough I guess.

So, here it is. Enjoy. It's on LFF because FF.net does not allow scriptfic.

http://lyokofreak.net/lff/viewstory.php?sid=384

If you're not used to the LFF format, the chapter itself is at the bottom.
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Postby SearchingLyoko » Fri Jan 01, 2010 3:33 am

Reminder to self: Read.

Sorry... can't right now... busy doing stuff.
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Postby Carth » Fri Jan 01, 2010 1:15 pm

Well, thank you for thinking about it in any case. ^___^

Scene 2 is up, I had that much written ahead.
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Postby SilverPrince » Fri Jan 01, 2010 1:59 pm

Carth.

Is it physically taxing to be so awesome all the time? I'm just wondering.

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Postby austronothrusclarki » Fri Jan 01, 2010 10:54 pm

Carth.

Is it physically taxing to be so awesome all the time? I'm just wondering.

Yes, I concur with that comment. You've written Odd well and haven't stereotyped him/portrayed him as too much of a comic relief.

ODD: No! This is William. (He walks over to WILLIAM, putting his arm around him.) He's gonna get expelled.

And I love that quote.......... :*D
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Postby Carth » Fri Jan 01, 2010 11:27 pm

austronothrusclarki wrote:
Carth.

Is it physically taxing to be so awesome all the time? I'm just wondering.

Yes, I concur with that comment. You've written Odd well and haven't stereotyped him/portrayed him as too much of a comic relief.

ODD: No! This is William. (He walks over to WILLIAM, putting his arm around him.) He's gonna get expelled.

And I love that quote.......... :*D


Socially, yes. Physically? No. If it was, I'd be thinner.

Thank you guys for the kind words and all! I've recently found Odd to be an enigma hiding beneath a stereotype. Most intriguing is his emotional coldness as compared to his overemotional Lyoko Warrior peers- and social and emotional coldness aren't the same thing. But I'm veering off topic. Yes I love that quote too. <3

Scene 3 is in progress. It's a rather long scene, and it has at least two songs (Sissi and Jeremie, respectively). Do you guys think I should come up with tunes, or leave that to your imagination?
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Postby Lani » Sat Jan 02, 2010 5:48 pm

I'm reading it now and,

ODD: Ooh! Me! (He leaves WILLIAM's side and runs over to ULRICH with renewed enthusiasm.) I'm Odd!

WILLIAM, ULRICH: Indeed.


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Postby SearchingLyoko » Sun Jan 03, 2010 1:57 am

Grr.... I gotta read this. That comment was awesome.

I must try to schedual in time.
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Personally with Odd, he is comical... but making him a complete emotionless clown is just ridiculous.

Though with his seeming coldness... I kind of have the same thing. You feel the same emotion, you just don't express it well.
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Postby austronothrusclarki » Sun Jan 03, 2010 4:59 pm

Do you guys think I should come up with tunes, or leave that to your imagination?

It might be a bit difficult to come up with tunes as well as lyrics, but if you have some tunes in mind, it would be awesome!
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Postby Carth » Mon Jan 04, 2010 6:32 pm

austronothrusclarki wrote:
Do you guys think I should come up with tunes, or leave that to your imagination?

It might be a bit difficult to come up with tunes as well as lyrics, but if you have some tunes in mind, it would be awesome!


Rudimentary ones, yes...I'm just afraid they all sound like each other. (They don't, of course...I just have little experience in the field of moosic.) The only one that has half a tune I actually like is "Jump" (Sissi's song). If I could remember how to read/write music again or had time to sing it, I could...

Scene 3 is up! Scene 3.5, which is the Jeremie scene I talked about up there, will be up tonight.
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Postby Carth » Wed Jan 06, 2010 9:54 am

Double posting! Scene 3.5 is up! It's not the best scene in the play, but it's necessary to get the ball rolling.
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Postby Lani » Wed Jan 27, 2010 10:03 pm

Girl. You should update faster.

NO PRESSURE, REALLY.
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Postby Carth » Wed Jan 27, 2010 10:05 pm

Lani wrote:Girl. You should update faster.

NO PRESSURE, REALLY.


Ahahaha...I kinda lost my motive to write it...a lot. 8D; Was it really that good that I should continue? :3
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Postby Lani » Wed Jan 27, 2010 10:09 pm

Well I mean, if you don't want to continue it's totally up to you. But I've never seen CL in a musical/play format before and to be honest I've never thought about it. But you pull it off really well and the lyrics to the songs are like, legit. Which is something a whole lot of people can't do. Plus I want to see your take on the story. IT'S INTERESTING, REALLY.
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Postby LadyLucy » Thu Dec 01, 2011 2:23 pm

Hey, Carth, I had a simular idea of making a CL musical a few years ago, and if you want to, we could try to work on the idea. I've written some themes- they're all on my old DA account but I can still send them to you, if you'd like. ^^ Then we could use your awesome ideas.
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