The Punic Wars

[TheAppleFreak]

Okay, so I have had my fanfiction advertisement in my sig for... idk, three months? And it has advertised my new fanfic, The Punic Wars.
Well, the wait is over! I have finally overcome the procrastination which plagues me so and finally published the prologue on the internet!
I personally think I can do a better job, so you can expect more in the other three parts (it's a trilogy, but I might split the stories up into seperate chapters).
To access it, you can click either the advertisement in my sig, the link below the ad in NEWS, or alternatively, click <s>here.</s>
This link no longer works. Please use the one in my sig or in the post below.

Please, comment and review it, as I feel as if I can do much better (I spent an hour writing it, so there's much room for improvement) on both the prologue and in the subsequent chapters.

[Tangent128 offline]

Duh-duh-duh...

[emoBillâ„¢ offline]

An hour?

That's it?

Just kidding. An hour for something like this seems about right.

*she just feels cool cuz she's using a phone to type this*

X3

[Sciron offline]

Sounds good so far. I'm not sure if the perspective completely matches Hopper's persona, but it sounds pretty accurate so far.

[TheAppleFreak]

Ok, once again, I have overcome procrastination and uploaded the first true chapter! It needs work, thats for sure, but it's a start in a new direction. I haven't gotten a beta reader, but I figure once my mind has overcome the thrills of Six Flags, I can work better on revising the story.
So.... yeah. The link will be up tomorrow. I think.

EDIT:
Ok, FF has assigned a URL to my story. Link is below.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5148500/1/The_Punic_Wars

[TheAppleFreak]

Okay, so it's been a while since I last updated TPW. I haven't stopped thinking about it, though, and have, in fact, begun to work on a replacement chapter 2. Spoiler alert: Something happens to Kiwi.

And for those of you who understand it, post #2.

[flokour offline]

Your writing style is amazing francis, why didnt you tell me you could write? As always if you need any help, with concept ideas or inspiration or whatnot just tell me.