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Code Lyoko: Reboot

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Code Lyoko: Reboot

Postby Lyoko Agent » Thu Sep 04, 2008 12:45 pm

Here's a fanfic I started after season 4 ended... I finally got around to finishing the first chapter... Hope you like it!

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Well, what did you think? Comments, constructive criticisms, concerns, etc...

Note: Chapter 2 may be done as early as tomorrow.
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Postby Sithking Zero » Thu Sep 04, 2008 1:13 pm

Okay, you're new here, but you have to understand, you can't put the actual fic on the forum. You have to put it somewhere else, like Fanfiction.net or Lyoko Freakers Fiction, and then provide a link to the story.
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Postby Lyoko Agent » Thu Sep 04, 2008 1:17 pm

Ah, okay. I started a fanfiction.net account yesterday, so when it finally activates tomorrow, I'll post it there. Sorry for the trouble!
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Postby Sithking Zero » Thu Sep 04, 2008 5:12 pm

That's okay. We all make mistakes when we're new, and that's one of the more common ones. Can't wait to read it!
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Postby TheAppleFreak » Sun Sep 14, 2008 5:21 pm

Its not that bad. I liked it, but you have to give more insight into what K.R.Y.P.T.O.S. is.
Otherwise, its perfect.
Can't wait for the third chapter!
I really gotta fix up this theme
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Postby emoBillâ„¢ » Mon Feb 16, 2009 2:43 pm

Here comes the Grammar Nazi.

Lyoko Agent wrote:He simply had to find out what that program he encountered was last night.

It might actually be better to put the 'was' after 'program' and add a 'that' before 'he', but it works this way.
Lyoko Agent wrote:As Jeremie Belpois sat reading the paper and drinking his coffee, his old laptop from his Junior High days

You might want to uncapitalize 'Junior High', as it's really not capital unless it's the name of a school.
[quote="Lyoko Agent"]His wife, Aelita, looked over at it. “Jeremie, why is your computer doing that?â€
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Postby Yumes » Wed Feb 18, 2009 7:30 am

very good plot, and well written.
This is one of the few story's where 'XANA IS COMMING BACK' and good at the same time =)
I'll be waiting for the next chapter =)
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Postby Phoenix Wolf » Sat Feb 21, 2009 12:35 am

I like it. You have done a good job, it is well written and has a good plot...
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