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Postby optimus304 » Wed Apr 28, 2010 12:49 pm

Taelia wrote:Who's Tannel? :umm:



Read the other chapters from the begining
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Postby Taelia » Wed Apr 28, 2010 3:11 pm

I see now. She's so mean and prideful - an arrogant piece of trash. She's bullying Sissi and making racist comments toward Yumi and the others. Good thing Jim's stepping in, in some chapters, but if I wrote chapter 9, I'd have him step in and protect Sissi. :)
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Postby optimus304 » Wed Apr 28, 2010 6:55 pm

Taelia wrote:I see now. She's so mean and prideful - an arrogant piece of trash. She's bullying Sissi and making racist comments toward Yumi and the others. Good thing Jim's stepping in, in some chapters, but if I wrote chapter 8, I'd have him step in and protect Sissi. :)


Dont worry. she gets her moment XD
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Postby Taelia » Wed Apr 28, 2010 9:31 pm

Good. Also, please make more mention of Sissi's mother.
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Postby optimus304 » Thu Apr 29, 2010 4:17 am

Taelia wrote:Good. Also, please make more mention of Sissi's mother.


Sissi is gonna be a full term character in this story
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Postby Taelia » Thu Apr 29, 2010 12:19 pm

What does that mean?
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Postby optimus304 » Fri Apr 30, 2010 9:36 pm

Taelia wrote:What does that mean?


She is a Main character
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Postby Taelia » Fri Apr 30, 2010 11:22 pm

Ah. I see now.
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Postby Slayer » Mon May 24, 2010 2:26 am

Nice chappy, i love how there is some history in this one :)
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Postby optimus304 » Thu Jul 15, 2010 10:30 pm

Here it is. Chapter 25. the secret of project vorseas is revealed. as well as what Waldo has learned. first off the crystal is not Alien. its inter dimensional. Also i felt Antea....Just seemed odd. so i gave her....a background.

and could it be??? SISSI AND ODD!!!!!!

Hell has froze over.

REVIEW OR HELL WILL THAW OUT!!!!!!!
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Postby Taelia » Sat Jul 17, 2010 8:34 pm

I don't think hell will freeze if Odd and Sissi start dating. But I'm proud of Sissi for standing up against Tannel.
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Postby optimus304 » Sat Aug 28, 2010 12:58 am

here it is. Jerlita fans can now turn to ooze at what is about to happen. the show never even gave them a chance...well in season 1 they did but this is diffrent. this need'd to happen

And since this is jeremy's first date. he need'd some helo from Ulrich and Odd....same for Aelita as a matter of fact.


The agents are on thier way to france. thier going to find themselves in a horrible situation.


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Postby Taelia » Sat Aug 28, 2010 11:32 pm

"I…I don't know. Its not really a subject I want to talk about." Aelita said. Sweat began to seep out of Yumi's Hair, she was worried Sissi might go back to her old ways and begin to snoop around to much.

'I'm sorry I shouldn't of asked. My mother died when I was young to. So I know how difficult it is to talk about it." Sissi said.

"How did she die?" Yumi asked as she wiped the sweat from her brow.

"She was in a car accident. It was snowing and the roads where bad." Sissi said as she finished up Aelita's finger nails.


That's how Sissi's mom died in my stories too, in a tragic car accident, when Sissi was five. But this is not the end of her. ;)
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Postby optimus304 » Sun Aug 29, 2010 2:54 am

Taelia wrote:
"I…I don't know. Its not really a subject I want to talk about." Aelita said. Sweat began to seep out of Yumi's Hair, she was worried Sissi might go back to her old ways and begin to snoop around to much.

'I'm sorry I shouldn't of asked. My mother died when I was young to. So I know how difficult it is to talk about it." Sissi said.

"How did she die?" Yumi asked as she wiped the sweat from her brow.

"She was in a car accident. It was snowing and the roads where bad." Sissi said as she finished up Aelita's finger nails.


That's how Sissi's mom died in my stories too, in a tragic car accident, when Sissi was five. But this is not the end of her. ;)


We will just have to wait and see now wont we?
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Postby Taelia » Sun Aug 29, 2010 9:50 am

yup
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Postby optimus304 » Tue Oct 05, 2010 2:09 am

Well here is chapter 27. every jerlita fans dream here....maybe. i figured they might have some from of romance and then some form of teen spirit moment.

The show Odd, Ulrich, sissi and Yumi are watching is called Gaki No Tsukai. its a hilarious japanese show you should check into.

This chapter marks the final chapter of the old order. in the next few chapters, the whole thing comes into play. everything and everyone will be explained. and the truth of lyoko. the system. Aelita and even the furture comes full circle.


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Postby optimus304 » Mon May 28, 2012 5:27 am

I know its been a while since i was on here but i finally finished up New Dawn.

At one point i wanted to just drop it but i got such a large out pour from the fans i had to finish it.

It can be viewed here
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4378582/1/T ... _b_bDawn_b

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