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My Name Is Nicolas Poliakoff

Postby Saphire-089 » Thu Feb 28, 2008 2:16 pm

This a story I published a couple of weeks ago, and I'd like some opinions on it, if you don't mind. (I'm not trying to sound desperate, but I need to know.)

http://www.fanfiction.net/secure/live_preview.php?storyid=4047438&chapter=1
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Postby Taelia » Thu Feb 28, 2008 3:23 pm

Excellent backstory for Nick! =D
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Postby DeadViolet » Thu Feb 28, 2008 9:12 pm

I read that, It kinda made me sad inside......
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Postby SilverPrince » Thu Feb 28, 2008 9:24 pm

This is a very deep, and very good, story. As a writer of backstories myself, I can appreciate this story. You put a lot of detail into it, making it like a real backstory.
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Postby Taelia » Fri Feb 29, 2008 12:23 am

I hate Nick's mother. She's a witch to poor widdle Nicky-boo.
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Postby Malkmusian » Fri Feb 29, 2008 6:06 pm

Now I see why Nick is so "dumb" and so angsty.

I want to be real friends with him, not just a Herve or a Sissi. Just a real friend.

Pass me the gun, Teebs. It's time to let the president know we're blowin' this joint.
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Postby DeadViolet » Mon Mar 03, 2008 6:36 pm

Taelia wrote:I hate Nick's mother. She's a witch to poor widdle Nicky-boo.
I hate her too. Kinds reminds me of Ren Sohma. A bit. *"Mama" by MCR plays*
"Poor Widdle Nicky-Boo?" I'm sorry, that made me giggle. :D ;)
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Postby Taelia » Thu Mar 06, 2008 10:58 pm

Glad it did. :)
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