A Change in Roles
I guess the story can be summarized as "What if Franz Hopper was evil the entire time, and was just manipulating the gang?". I know, I probably need to improve my writing technique, but I think it's a good start.
Oh, and on a side note.....
I've decided that I am killing off one character in chapter 7. I've narrowed down the list, but I can't pick one (or in the case of Yumi's parents, two). Lyoko Freak has been like a home to me, so I've made a decision: YOU get to pick who dies.
Edit: Chapter 2 is up now.
Edit2: Chapter 3 is up.
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by Reesane » Fri Nov 16, 2007 10:31 pm
Last edited by Reesane on Fri Dec 28, 2007 7:09 pm, edited 3 times in total.
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by Sithking Zero » Sun Nov 18, 2007 1:04 am
I don't know who to say! I like all of them, except for Ulrich's dad! And if you kill him, he'll probably turn even more emo and/or turn to the dark side and cause... ANGST. (DUN DUN DUN!!!)
ON second thought, I like seeing Ulrich suffer. Go with his dad.
P.S.: Great story, BTW.
ON second thought, I like seeing Ulrich suffer. Go with his dad.
P.S.: Great story, BTW.
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by Reesane » Thu Nov 22, 2007 11:40 pm
Second chapter is up! I don't have much to say about it....
Disclaimer:I am not in any way an UxS supporter. In fact, the only two couples I will happily support are OddxSam and AelitaxJeremie. I'm leaving the Ulrich-Sissi-Yumi-William love quadrangle boiling like the fire ball of magma it is.:evillaugh:
Thanks for Betaing for me, Sithking.
Disclaimer:I am not in any way an UxS supporter. In fact, the only two couples I will happily support are OddxSam and AelitaxJeremie. I'm leaving the Ulrich-Sissi-Yumi-William love quadrangle boiling like the fire ball of magma it is.:evillaugh:
Thanks for Betaing for me, Sithking.
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by Sithking Zero » Fri Nov 23, 2007 1:01 am
You're welcome! It was my pleasure.
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by twilightchaos09 » Fri Nov 23, 2007 2:37 pm
Taelia wrote:No one DIES in CL.
Wanna bet on that? I can easily disprove that. As for the story, its awesome. Keep up the good work!
by Sithking Zero » Fri Nov 23, 2007 4:07 pm
LDChaosBdon wrote:Taelia wrote:No one DIES in CL.
Wanna bet on that? I can easily disprove that. As for the story, its awesome. Keep up the good work!
Really? How?
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by twilightchaos09 » Fri Nov 23, 2007 6:19 pm
Sithking Zero wrote:LDChaosBdon wrote:Taelia wrote:No one DIES in CL.
Wanna bet on that? I can easily disprove that. As for the story, its awesome. Keep up the good work!
Really? How?
EAsy. I've seen the end of Code Lyoko Season 4. I won't start spoiling anything, but I can easily disprove that if you want me to. Just say the word, and I'll tell you. And it's no one in the list in the poll.
by Reesane » Fri Nov 23, 2007 6:36 pm
LDChaosBdon wrote:Sithking Zero wrote:LDChaosBdon wrote:Taelia wrote:No one DIES in CL.
Wanna bet on that? I can easily disprove that. As for the story, its awesome. Keep up the good work!
Really? How?
EAsy. I've seen the end of Code Lyoko Season 4. I won't start spoiling anything, but I can easily disprove that if you want me to. Just say the word, and I'll tell you. And it's no one in the list in the poll.
Well, if I killed them off, it would ruin the entire plot.....
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by twilightchaos09 » Fri Nov 23, 2007 6:48 pm
No idea what you mean by that. Anyway, I'll say who it is if you want me to. But, anyway, when can we expect the next chapter?
by Malkmusian » Fri Nov 23, 2007 7:26 pm
It's good, but where's Aelita? I know Franz just kidnapped her, but is she gone from the plot?
The creator, Carth, had never experienced autism until she read my story.
Sorry I was gone.
by Reesane » Fri Nov 23, 2007 8:03 pm
kamekai wrote:I haven't seen the spoilers, but I have an idea of what you're talking about. And it wasn't dying so much as decompiling.
No.... Not not even close....
Tom Servo, she'll be back soon. I'm not leaving her out for longer than I need to. I'll start work on the next chapter in about an hour, but it might not be up until Tuesday. Depends on what mood I'm in.
LDCB, I already have seen all of the episodes (In French) so I know what happens in the end. Which is why I'm writing this story.
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by Sithking Zero » Fri Nov 23, 2007 8:17 pm
LDChaosBdon wrote:Sithking Zero wrote:LDChaosBdon wrote:Taelia wrote:No one DIES in CL.
Wanna bet on that? I can easily disprove that. As for the story, its awesome. Keep up the good work!
Really? How?
EAsy. I've seen the end of Code Lyoko Season 4. I won't start spoiling anything, but I can easily disprove that if you want me to. Just say the word, and I'll tell you. And it's no one in the list in the poll.
Oh, right. I forgot about him.
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by Reesane » Sun Apr 27, 2008 11:08 pm
*Bump*
I finally got around to updating.
This is probably the longest single chapter I've ever written, and one of the few writing pieces I've done where I don't wince when I re-read it.
Anyway, it's up. I'll be re-editing it in about a day or so to see if Zero caught anything my other beta didn't.
I finally got around to updating.
This is probably the longest single chapter I've ever written, and one of the few writing pieces I've done where I don't wince when I re-read it.
Anyway, it's up. I'll be re-editing it in about a day or so to see if Zero caught anything my other beta didn't.
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