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kamekai wrote:After all the typos, misspellings, and bad grammar, there's really nothing to review.
not really.
actually, after all the typos, misspellings, and bad grammar, it's an okay story, not awesome, not suckish. just... average. but, I never could really get into short stories, anyway.
and causing his s to be cut
“Why are you on acid?” She
“Well, I’ll see you later.” Aelita replies, “Okay. Have fun!”
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