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Postby Carth » Fri Jun 22, 2007 7:30 pm

Well, after Ten Seconds, I decided to put another fanfic out there- a longer one this time. It's my interpretation of what happened on June 6, 1994. Thing is, I don't have magical RTTP abilities, so I sent poor Jeremie back to look for me. That is, I told XANA to do it and persuaded him he could be trapped there. So...here we go. Enjoy it!

Rated T for some language and gore later on.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3610335/1/
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Postby Taelia » Fri Jun 22, 2007 7:42 pm

Nice! You're a great fanfic author. :D
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Postby SilverPrince » Fri Jun 22, 2007 7:50 pm

That was awesome! But... what did that have to do with June 6th, 1994?
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Postby Carth » Fri Jun 22, 2007 7:52 pm

Lyoko422 wrote:That was awesome! But... what did that have to do with June 6th, 1994?


I haven't gotten there yet. This is SETUP. =D

I have plans for Jeremie's trip into the deep past. Yes I dooooo...
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Postby SilverPrince » Fri Jun 22, 2007 7:53 pm

*blinks* I have just suffered from what some people may call a "blonde moment".

I thought you were done... *smacks forhead*
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Postby Taelia » Fri Jun 22, 2007 8:00 pm

Ooooo. :D
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Postby Rail Runner » Fri Jun 22, 2007 8:55 pm

Very good story Carth, I cant wait to see what happens.
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Postby Taelia » Fri Jun 22, 2007 10:25 pm

I agree. :D
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Postby Carth » Sun Jun 24, 2007 5:31 pm

Thanks, guys! X3

Chapter 2 is just up. Jeremie's just been sucked into the timestream to go to the past.
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Postby Taelia » Sun Jun 24, 2007 7:15 pm

Neat! =D This fic is shaping up nicely.
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Postby Malkmusian » Thu Jun 28, 2007 9:07 pm

You were pretty good at writing the story.

Can you please read my story?
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Postby Carth » Fri Jul 06, 2007 1:39 pm

Okie! It looks pretty interesting. I'll read it.

Chapters 3 and 4 are up. Read. READ.
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Postby Taelia » Fri Jul 06, 2007 1:57 pm

How is Jeremie gonna return to the present time?
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Postby Malkmusian » Mon Jul 09, 2007 8:45 pm

I enjoyed the story, with Aelita actually cursing in your perspective. In mine, she curses later on.
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Postby twilightchaos09 » Sun Jul 15, 2007 1:46 pm

This is one of the greatest fanfictions I've read in a long time.

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Postby Carth » Tue Jul 24, 2007 1:57 pm

Srsly? Wow. 0_0

Chapter 6 is up. It took a long long long time to write. Yesh.
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Postby twilightchaos09 » Sun Jul 29, 2007 11:02 pm

Carth wrote:Srsly? Wow. 0_0

Chapter 6 is up. It took a long long long time to write. Yesh.


Is, it is. I love the story, I just wish chapters came faster(Yes, Im abnormally impatient). But if it's worth the wait, then so be it.

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Postby Malkmusian » Mon Jul 30, 2007 5:16 pm

Franz is going crazy in that story, even asking Aelita to find Men in Black.

Still, the story is flippin' awesome! How do you do it, make a story that every will like?
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Postby Carth » Tue Jul 31, 2007 3:29 pm

Uh...my head makes it? :D

Ch. 7 is up. Enjoy it, reader humans.
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Postby twilightchaos09 » Tue Jul 31, 2007 3:29 pm

YAAAAAAAAAA. that was quick for chapter 7.

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Postby MewmiC » Tue Jul 31, 2007 4:20 pm

Nice story, I really like it and your portrayal of past Aelita.
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Postby bduddy » Thu Aug 02, 2007 12:42 am

Brilliant-absolutely brilliant! The best CL fic I've ever seen!
(but I haven't seen that many... >_>)
Seriously, though, I wish the writers of the show were more like this...

Aside: Why does every one on fanfiction.net feel the need to include those "disclaimers"? And yours isn't clear enough-perhaps someone stole your little sister... >_>

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Postby Kamekai » Fri Aug 03, 2007 12:16 am

legal issues, the like. If you tried hard enough, and had one hellava lawyer, I'm sure you could override half of the ones on there, make a few bucks. >_>
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Postby twilightchaos09 » Sat Aug 04, 2007 6:49 pm

kamekai wrote:legal issues, the like. If you tried hard enough, and had one hellava lawyer, I'm sure you could override half of the ones on there, make a few bucks. >_>

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ROFL, thats hilariously true.

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Postby Carth » Sat Aug 18, 2007 8:13 am

Well, I have no intention of doing that. :)

Chapter 8 is up. One that a lot of people have been waiting for for a long time...
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