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Postby JesusFreak » Thu Jan 31, 2008 5:05 pm

Very nice story, although the ending kinda petered out in my opinion.
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Postby Carth » Tue Feb 12, 2008 7:19 am

Well, it's over. The Epilogue's just been published. :DD

I really want to thank you all for having faith in this, and for reading it. :)
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Postby Taelia » Tue Feb 12, 2008 1:39 pm

Thank goodness. :)
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Postby Tangent128 » Tue Feb 12, 2008 2:05 pm

Apparently XANA doesn't find ghosts illogical...

Good story. "The Dunbar Element" looks fun, though I'm really waiting for "Cockroaches Are People, Too".
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Postby Taelia » Tue Feb 12, 2008 2:36 pm

Maybe you can help me with my story idea, Carth. :)
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Postby Malkmusian » Tue Feb 12, 2008 6:37 pm

Story pwned at the end.

Score: 9/10....
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Postby JesusFreak » Wed Feb 13, 2008 10:31 am

Ah, it picked back up in the epilouges.


Excellent, EXCELLENT work.

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Postby ODDCHEEZY » Thu Feb 21, 2008 6:30 pm

That's really good. I stayed up till 2 am trying to read it because i couldn't stop. I give it a 9/10 but only because it confused me a bit in the end.
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Postby Phoenix Wolf » Thu Feb 21, 2008 7:28 pm

I give it a score of 10/10
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Postby Carth » Mon Feb 25, 2008 5:01 pm

Thankies, peoples! ^_^

I've started the editing process, and the new Chapter 1 is up. Is it better than the original? Worse? Could use improvement? Tell me, please. :)
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Postby ODDCHEEZY » Thu Feb 28, 2008 10:01 pm

Better! :thumbs up:
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Postby Carth » Mon Mar 03, 2008 11:04 pm

Ch. 2 edited. I will be writing other stuff- I just have to get through this and a non-CL thingy first. :D
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Postby Sithking Zero » Tue Mar 04, 2008 7:55 pm

That reminds me- I gotta work on Heart of a Warrior... Sorry the story is over...
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Postby Malkmusian » Tue Mar 04, 2008 8:32 pm

Still, that means I have to write some more fanfiction.

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Postby Nightsabre » Thu Mar 20, 2008 3:00 am

Kudos to such a awesome story. I look forward to reading many more of your works in the future.
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