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Heart of a Warrior III: Warrior's Redemption

Postby Sithking Zero » Sat Nov 11, 2006 5:27 pm

Heart of a Warrior III: Warrior's Redemption

Rated Teen. MegamanXCode: Lyoko Crossover fic.

It's the final installment in the series!

The forces of darkness are closing in on the Lyoko Gang and Bass. Will they stand against the darkness, or will one by one they fall?

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Postby Shademan v.39 » Mon Nov 13, 2006 12:36 am

Awesome stuff, man. Awesome stuff.
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Postby Ulrich's lil bro » Thu Nov 23, 2006 6:33 pm

When's the next update? I wanna see more! I haven't gotten an action buzz for a while.
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Postby Sithking Zero » Fri Nov 24, 2006 12:54 am

I'm working on it, I'm working on it! The subject of the first chapter is not one that I write well, but the idea of it was too good to pass up. Sorry to keep you guys waiting!
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Postby Shademan v.39 » Sat Nov 25, 2006 4:33 am

Don't worry, man! Take your time! A good piece of art is never rushed!
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Postby Ulrich's lil bro » Sun Nov 26, 2006 9:17 pm

Yeah, what he said!

*scoul* UPDATE!

But, seriously, take yopur time and make it good, or else... I WON'T GIVE YOU PRESENTS FOR CHRISTMAS! *puts on Grinch costume*

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Postby Sithking Zero » Mon Nov 27, 2006 8:20 am

No, really, just wait a little, okay?

I've hired a specialist to help me out (*cough**mysister**cough*). She's better at writing... the subject of chapter two then I am. After that, I regain full creative controll.
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Postby Shademan v.39 » Mon Nov 27, 2006 7:20 pm

Cool, man. You know, maybe it's just me, but it seems to me that the longer one waits for something to come out, the better it turns out to be. This chapter shall be no exception!! Sithking and Blitz Chick all the way! I love cookies! Which has nothing to do with Sithking's chapter! I'll stop spamming now!
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Postby Ulrich's lil bro » Wed Nov 29, 2006 11:41 pm

I'm likin the sounds of this! Sweet! See ya in the next chappie! *sits and patiently waits. With chocolate.*

(Can't forget my chocolate.)
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Postby Sithking Zero » Wed Nov 29, 2006 11:59 pm

...Better get a lot of chocolate. My sister can't even begin work on the chapter until the end of the week, and it'll probably take slightly longer then that to get the chapter ready. Not that that's a bad thing- as Shademan said, the longer it takes for something to come out, the better it is (usually). Just I'd have prefered a slightly faster update schedule.
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Postby Shademan v.39 » Thu Nov 30, 2006 12:58 am

Well, if your sister can't work on it until later, then try and find something else to work on in the mean time.
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Postby Ulrich's lil bro » Thu Dec 07, 2006 8:11 pm

So, how's progress? :)
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Postby Sithking Zero » Sat Dec 16, 2006 2:29 am

HOLD THE PHONE!! HOLD THE PHONE!!!


The Second chapter has now been posted! READ IT OR I WILL GO BASS ON YOUR SOUL!!
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Postby Shademan v.39 » Mon Dec 18, 2006 11:24 am

Awesome work as always!
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Postby Ulrich's lil bro » Mon Dec 18, 2006 7:51 pm

CLIFFIE!! Grr... uuum, anyways, nice chappie and can't wait for more and...

MY COMPUTER'S BEIN A PAIN!!

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Postby Sithking Zero » Mon Dec 25, 2006 1:35 pm

Chapter 3: A perfect day, a perfect comeback, is now uploaded! READ IT!

(even though it sucks.)
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Postby Ulrich's lil bro » Thu Dec 28, 2006 5:13 pm

heh... PoC..

I'm using way too many dots, but, good chapter and I see that there's going to be some action on the next one again! YAY!

(Now i keep forgetting if i didn't put this story on alert. Oh well. *added to story Alert* :D )
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Postby Rudger » Fri Dec 29, 2006 12:02 am

Good chapie. Romance and action and suspence. I loved the "...virtualize you into the digital sea..." comment. Brilliant work, although it is definately not your best ;) . I'm eager to see your next chapter.

(shameless self promotion ahead!)

I'm also hoping to see a reveiw from you and Shademan on my latest chapter ;) ;) . you guys were my best reveiwers, always helpful and everything...

anyways, Nice Chapie, hope to hear from you soon,

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Postby Sithking Zero » Fri Dec 29, 2006 12:29 am

Was it really that obvious that it wasn't my best? [/sweatdropage]

Here's how I wrote it:

Step one: Ask sister to write it; she's a girl who happens to know what people do on dates.

Step two: Wait.

Step three: Wait more.

Step four: Lose patience. Contact other authors.

Step five: talk to sister. Find out she has no idea how to write CL stuff.

Step six: Panic.

Step seven: Contact Lucy McGonagle. She's awesome.

Step eight: Have Lucy convince self that the stuff you got isn't a worthless piece of crap.

step nine: Throw something together, hope no lynch mobs show up.

Step ten: Comment on other people's reactions to it on LF. :D

Yeah, I just got fed up and started writing. I'll try to review your story soon, Rudger!

Don't worry, the next chapter won't be as cruddy.
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Postby Rudger » Fri Dec 29, 2006 12:42 am

I never said it was cruddy. It's a fine pice of literature, but you usually produce stuff of far greater quality. All I'm trying to say is that your a great author and this was pretty average. not bad at all! just less than I expect from you is all. please take no offence.
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Postby Sithking Zero » Mon May 14, 2007 4:37 pm

Chapter 7 is now up!
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Postby Phoenix Wolf » Mon May 14, 2007 5:44 pm

Ausome simply Ausome
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Postby Rail Runner » Mon May 14, 2007 7:36 pm

Great story. Its coming together well.
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Postby Phoenix Wolf » Fri May 18, 2007 12:37 am

Ausome it is really good..
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Postby Sithking Zero » Sun Jul 01, 2007 12:29 am

Chapter 9: Shadow of a Shadow of a Doubt Part II is now up! READ IT!!!
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