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[Skysong offline]

Heheh... sorry about that, here's the link. http://fanfiction.net/s/2490580/1/

Um... this has nothing to do with the post but I had to use it, it was staring at me:

[MY85 offline]

Ahem... you have to put the link to your fanfic, it's part of the rules. Please, do it.

[Skysong offline]

Oh... hehe.. sorry... I'll fix that.

[Paige offline]

Hey that's a good fanfic. But I don't really wanna hear about Odd's heart being broken and everything. I like Odd to be the one who is always happy and Odd is my 2nd favorite character for that reason. So It was really good... but maybe you should think up of a situation where the lyoko gang has to save the world.

[Skysong offline]

I've been trying to think of a proper CL fanfic for ages... but nothing comes... except an AU and a crossover. I'm kind of... addicted... to having the cheerful characters on shows be angsty and stuff... it's a bad habit.

[Paige offline]

I'm glad I didn't offend you. whew good.

[Skysong offline]

Offending me is darn near impossible. I love this show and it annoys the *heck* out of me that I can't think of a normal fanfic... except really, really weird random humor ones.

[Paige offline]

Thats good to know.

[SamBlob offline]

Odd heartbroken? Must read!

*reads it*

Well done! Nice capture of the dull, thudding ache.

Reminds me of The Great Pretender, as performed by The Platters

[Skysong offline]

Hey, that *does* fit really well! Cool!

[GOGOLINIICHAN! offline]

Hey that's a good fanfic. But I don't really wanna hear about Odd's heart being broken and everything. I like Odd to be the one who is always happy and Odd is my 2nd favorite character for that reason. So It was really good... but maybe you should think up of a situation where the lyoko gang has to save the world.

Umm, Paige, not to be rude or anything but none of this is really relevant to the fanfic. Maybe you do not like Odd being depressed but that doesn't really affect whether or not the fanfic is good. It's just not your prefered genre.

:P I've been trying to think of a proper CL fanfic for ages... but nothing comes... except an AU and a crossover. I'm kind of... addicted... to having the cheerful characters on shows be angsty and stuff... it's a bad habit.

Sky, the fic you wrote was more than proper! It was amazing! It was written very well and the concept was very believable. As Paige pointed out, Odd isn't usually depressed (or, rather, doesn't show it) but he is capable of the feeling, like all human beings. Some authors make Odd way too depressed and it isn't believable. Yours was done very nicely, in a very "Odd" way. It was just like him.. I could easily see him acting like that. You had a few grammar mistakes but that can be fixed easily.. otherwise it flowed nicely.

Super job! =D

[Skysong offline]

That would be because I was trying to type it up without A) a proper place to set my laptop or my notebook with what I had written and B) I was in a hurry 'cause my batteries were dying.

[SamBlob offline]

That would be because I was trying to type it up without A) a proper place to set my laptop or my notebook with what I had written and B) I was in a hurry 'cause my batteries were dying.

Well, as Linii said, that can be remedied when the resources (time, charge, Internet connection) allow...