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[MY85 offline]

Guardians Of The Towers

Enjoy....

It was my first time doing this kind of stuff. If it's bad, please don't flame me if I was like some sort of dumb newbie, ok?

[Paige offline]

I like it! It's really interesting. Very creative. I hope you write more. It's really good for your first try.

[MY85 offline]

Thanks for being the first person who comments on it!! I wonder if anyone else enjoys it...

[Dummo Marx]

Very good dude, very good...but as much as it's good, it lacks many other things:

Spelling and grammar: Dude, get a proof reader to spell check and error check your chappies before posting them

Description: I'm not a big fan of complex descriptions (they ruin the mood and get you thinking of something outside the main plot) but at least grant us the description of the XANA sharks. A proof reader should solve this easily, without you having to care from the first go about the quality of the fiction.

Dialogues: Just some minor things I can't see the charaters saying...again, proof readers solve this in a matter of minutes...

[Ransomed_Heart offline]

Your plot is nice, and I love your summary! I think you could be a little more descriptive, just to give us more imagery.

Minor spelling and grammar, I think that spell check and a beta reader will solve this easily.

Overall? Good Job!

[MY85 offline]

Okay, the lack of description critic I can accept, I'm not that good on description. Sorry for the spelling, but my pc is kinda effed up, I can't install things that easily (I'm not GradeA).

I'm pretty sure someone might have flamed me on ff.net, I'm gonna check it right now.

[Paige offline]

I thought it was good. Who cares about spelling and grammar as long as you can read it and understand what it says? I don't But Emma does.

[Stephen (x1)]

Dude, there were no flames.

[MY85 offline]

Dude, there were no flames.

I know... and by the way, there's already a third chapter right now.

[Dummo Marx]

Hmm...ok, good good (very good in fact)

Same probs with the last two chappies (grammar and description) and...where was the message?...did Odd say it out loud or was it on the PC (it's too monotonous for Odd to've said it)

And too many swear words for my tastes dude

[MY85 offline]

Hmm...ok, good good (very good in fact)

Same probs with the last two chappies (grammar and description) and...where was the message?...did Odd say it out loud or was it on the PC (it's too monotonous for Odd to've said it)

And too many swear words for my tastes dude

I'm already giving you the answers by Msn. And for the swearing thing, I just changed the rating from T to M, knowing myelf well enough.

[MY85 offline]

4th Chapter here.

Enjoy...

[Dummo Marx]

Why can only latin amercians capture good cliffhangers?...j/k

All joking aside dude....another very good plot twist....but the mistakes are getting very hard on the eyes...and when I mean hard I mean leprasy on 'em peepers kinda hard....

[MY85 offline]

but the mistakes are getting very hard on the eyes...and when I mean hard I mean leprasy on 'em peepers kinda hard....

Yuo just did a mistake: it's leprosy, not leprasy. Sorry if I point this out to you...

Btw, Fifth chapter done!!

Honestly, I would like a review on the Fanfiction site, if you people don't mind.

[MY85 offline]

Well, here's the 6th chapter pf the fanfic no one cares about.... btw, I'm thinking of quittting it after I add some more chapters.

[MY85 offline]

Hey, it's me again. I just wanna know if some of you guys can see that my first 3 chapters are already edited. And when I say this, I mean to see there some words like this at the begining of each chapter.

Edit: Problem fixed and better now...