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Hazed [dark fic]

Postby Stonecreek » Fri Mar 03, 2006 7:19 pm

This is Rodri's reward for guessing the lyrics in my sig. See, you DO get prizes! Anyway, this is dark, has adult language and themes, and is probably a PG-15 or so. Could be seen as a season three possibility, but I categorize it as AU. P:lease read and review, and read my other fics while you're at it. A second part will be on the way in two weeks' time. It would be done sooner, but I will have no net access over Spring Break. Now, the main event:

EDIT: And I see why it only got 10 clicks. The link was wrong. DOH! It works now, though. Please enjoy.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2827350/1/
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YDV wrote:Well you see, the amount of time we didn't normally hang around BKO is kind of like potential energy, and then when we all finally came back at the same time it's like letting loose a catapult. 8D

It's all very scientifical. |D


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Postby . » Sun Mar 05, 2006 2:06 am

Beutifully written, kinda felt like a let down towards the end though. 7/10
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Postby Stonecreek » Sun Mar 05, 2006 2:10 am

That's because a second part is coming in a few weeks.
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YDV wrote:Well you see, the amount of time we didn't normally hang around BKO is kind of like potential energy, and then when we all finally came back at the same time it's like letting loose a catapult. 8D

It's all very scientifical. |D


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Postby . » Sun Mar 05, 2006 2:16 am

ah well then, I change my rating to a 8/10. I thought it was a one-shotter.
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Postby MY85 » Sun Apr 02, 2006 12:17 am

Come on... when's the second part of this fic coming out?? I like the story as it goes.

Give it a read, and if you review, do it on ff.net. It'll make Stonecreek feel better about his work and get more appreciation of it.
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Postby Stonecreek » Sun Apr 02, 2006 12:21 am

Funny you say that, because I just PM'ed you 10 minutes ago with what I have written. I want your edits, seeing as the fic's for you, before I post.
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YDV wrote:Well you see, the amount of time we didn't normally hang around BKO is kind of like potential energy, and then when we all finally came back at the same time it's like letting loose a catapult. 8D

It's all very scientifical. |D


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Postby Rail Runner » Mon Apr 03, 2006 10:43 pm

really good story stonecreek 10/10 ..*im not signed up on ff.net* cant wait for the second part of it.
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Postby Stonecreek » Mon Aug 28, 2006 5:03 pm

The second chapter is here! This has been sitting around half-written since mid-April. Then my hard drive crashed, and I got a new one. I had to go digging around for a handwritten copy of this so I could finish what I had started. This chapter was going to be the last one, but instead it is now the second of three planned chapters. Enjoy, and please review.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2827350/2/

Also, I have posted another chapter of my most successful fanfic, Incoherent. It is a Harry Potter fanfic, and is rated M for a reason (innuendo aplenty). Please take a look and leave some contsructive crit.
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YDV wrote:Well you see, the amount of time we didn't normally hang around BKO is kind of like potential energy, and then when we all finally came back at the same time it's like letting loose a catapult. 8D

It's all very scientifical. |D


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