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For fanfic writers/readers. Post your fics, or recommend one that you thought was good!

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what did you think?

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lonely without you

Postby odd girl » Tue Feb 21, 2006 4:51 pm

its my story that iam writmg at the moment, and i would really aprciate if you could give me some feedback on it and what i can improve



http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2551537/1/

and only constuctive critaisam please. :D
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Postby Jeremified » Thu Feb 23, 2006 6:56 pm

It's OK, but it's kinda short... oh well. It's still good.
thank you all for the good memories <3
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