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Postby LoVeIsBeAuTiFuL » Sat Feb 11, 2006 12:59 pm

A very sad story but please read it still in being written

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Postby LoVeIsBeAuTiFuL » Sat Feb 11, 2006 11:55 pm

Oh ten look but don't post flame are welcome please I'm bored pretty please your my spirit.
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Postby Stonecreek » Sun Feb 12, 2006 12:00 am

You need a beta reader to handle the technical stuff. You have your share of typos and grammatical inconsistencies. Your imagination, however, is not lacking. Good basis for a much larger piece. Fix it up and I'll read some more.
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YDV wrote:Well you see, the amount of time we didn't normally hang around BKO is kind of like potential energy, and then when we all finally came back at the same time it's like letting loose a catapult. 8D

It's all very scientifical. |D


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Postby LoVeIsBeAuTiFuL » Sun Feb 12, 2006 12:05 am

huh?
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Postby Stonecreek » Sun Feb 12, 2006 12:08 am

Beta reader=editor. Someone to look over the story and find the erros in it before you post it. A story that has been pre-read is generally easier to read than one that has just been put up as soon as it is written. Find someone to read over your works before you post them to avoid messy typos and such.
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YDV wrote:Well you see, the amount of time we didn't normally hang around BKO is kind of like potential energy, and then when we all finally came back at the same time it's like letting loose a catapult. 8D

It's all very scientifical. |D


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Postby LoVeIsBeAuTiFuL » Sun Feb 12, 2006 12:14 am

Look over my posts right quick and you'll see I can't type at all beside this just a lowrent, secordrate, 59 cent store story not even an origral peolpe
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Postby Stonecreek » Sun Feb 12, 2006 12:16 am

At least have some pride in what you wirte/type.
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YDV wrote:Well you see, the amount of time we didn't normally hang around BKO is kind of like potential energy, and then when we all finally came back at the same time it's like letting loose a catapult. 8D

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Postby LoVeIsBeAuTiFuL » Sun Feb 12, 2006 12:23 am

I DO MAN!

It just its you know copy write it by moonscoop and not my own
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