Corrupted Code

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Part 1: Corrupted Code

Aelita wakes up with a head ache wondering what had happened to her. She was in the polar region somewhere under ground in a large cavern. She climbed she began to walk upward through a tunnel leading upward hopefully out. She had exited the cavern and made her way up into a small cliff near a tower. Gazing over the cliff she discovers a shocking and frightful sight. LYOKO has been broken; the sky was cracked in large area's showing the code of LYOKO.

"Is anyone out there" Aelita yelled at the top of her lungs wondering if anyone is out there? No one replied she was all alone in LYOKO. She entered the tower and opened up a terminal hoping to find answers to what had happened to LYOKO. Last thing that she could remember was entering the tower and starting code LYOKO. Then she received a call hoping it was Jeremie, it was another person but because of such a poor connection the call dropped a second after coming on.

Aelita stayed at the tower searching for useful information on the out side world. A few hours passed and still no one answered. Aelita exited the tower and saw a figure running toward the tower covering their face with a hood. Suddenly a new creature arose from the sea of ice bearing the mark of XANA on its body but it was an overlarge sea creature corrupted of data. Aelita yelled "Look out behind you". The hooded person jumped into the air tackling the creature into the water. Killing it with a single swing of his dagger. He leaped onto the platform in front of Aelita. "Aelita there's no time to explain you must come with me". Aelita was pulled by the arm into the tower where the strange man yelled out "Code NEON". A bright flash appeared and they both awoke in a scanner at the factory.

The hooded man was a boy about the same age as Jeremie. He was about 6 feet tall with white and black hair with a strange scar on his right hand. "Come now he said we have to go or it will be to late" boy told Aelita. "Im not going anywhere until you tell me what's going on" Aelita replied. "I can explain later but now we must get out of her its not safe for both of us" he said. The proceeded out side taking the elevator running out side to a blue car across the bridge. Aelita gazed at the sky which was full of pollution and destruction. "Get in" he said to Aelita. He started up the car and drove off with the confused Aelita heading toward the outskirts of the city. "Now tell me what's going on, why is the world and LYOKO corrupted" Aelita said. "Let me ask you something do you know how long you've been down in that cavern for" he said. "No" Aelita said. "50 years inside of LYOKO and much has changed since your last encounter with XANA in LYOKO. You fell into a comma after using code LYOKO in the last tower and you've been asleep since. So sorry I forgot to introduce my self my name is Night" Night said. "What happened then to Jeremie and the others" she asked Night. "Im sorry to say this but they are deceased not long after you disappeared after fighting of another XANA attack" Night said. "Jeremie" Aelita said beginning to cry.

After an hour of driving they arrived at a small house near the ocean. They both exited the car and walked to the entrance of the house. Aelita was still crying from the death of her friends. "Home sweet home" Night said. He pushed open the door and the house was completely dark except for a light coming from a nearby room. He opened the door to the room where a long eared boy sat a computer typing up codes. Aelita I would like to introduce you to my brother Zero. "Greetings Aelita we've been searching for quite sometime for you. You did give us a run for our money" Zero said. Zero was a 14 year old kid much resembling Night. "Aelita please take a seat". She sat down in a nearby chair. Aelita do you remember seeing the sky corrupted of data in LYOKO". "Yes" she said softly. "Oh no I forgot about the virus XANA placed in me" Aelita said bolting out of her seat. "Don't worry XANA removed that virus a few years back". Aelita sat back down. "Now let's get back to business" Zero said. "You are aware that you were in a comma for 50 years correct. Now in that time XANA broke out of LYOKO and integrated himself with every system in the world thus giving him complete control of practically everything and with out you or anyone else to stop him it was impossible to stop him" Zero said in a serious gesture. "But we may have a solution to this entire problem" Night said. "Yes, I have been working on a program for 20 years that will help you get back to your time and you can stop XANA from creating this future" Zero said returning to his computer. "I have one question I have to ask you two" Aelita said. "Why do you two look as young as you claim to have been working on this program for 20 years". "We were enhanced by XANA to be his obedient slaves to work in his army so he changed our D.N.A. to make us age a lot slower than normal humans. But we broke away from his grasp now we fight against him and now since we have found you we can put our plan into action. This is to use a code NEON that acts like a super version of code LYOKO which will send you back 50 years to the point where everything changed". Night said trying to hold back his anger. "Aelita you better get some sleep it's been a rough day. You can sleep on my bed its right down the hall" Night said as he was leaving the room. Aelita rested at the edge of the bed sitting down wondering how this could have happened. She began to hear a faint noise coming out from outside. She left the room quietly not trying to wake anyone. She looked outside and saw XANA's monsters coming out from the woods. She quickly yelled out to alert Night and Zero that were thought to be inside sleeping. They both came out bursting through the windows shooting most of XANA's monsters as they came closer. They quickly destroyed the rest in not time. "Aelita quick get in the car were leaving" they both shouted in a worried way. They began to drive of heading towards the factory.

They arrived at the factory sometime after. They entered the factory and into the room where Jeremy once worked on LYOKO. Zero left the elevator and sat down putting the disk into the console. "Go down ill virtualize you into LYOKO. "And don't activate the code until I say so" Zero said to us quickly trying to give us as much time as possible. Aelita and Night proceeded into the virtualization room. They both entered a scanner. "Virtualizing now". "Back in the polar region I see" said Night. "Aelita are you ok". "Yes im fine. Let's hurry to the tower". They ran as quickly as they could try to reach the tower. The tower was being blockaded by Xana's monsters. "No way is he stopping us". He threw his daggers at 5 of XANA's monsters. Then took out his sword but before he could even get close. XANA reared his ugly head taking the shape of a dark shadow hovering in mid air. "Aelita get in the tower and wait for Zero's signal". What are you waiting for go"! Aelita ran into the tower waiting for Zero to signal her. Night stood in front of the tower. He began to hover himself upward to XANA's level. They both charged at each other knocking themselves backwards into the water. "Aelita its time, time to go" Zero shouted. "Jeremie, im coming" Aelita said activating the terminal. "Good bye Aelita hope to see you again in the future". Night said before the tower disappeared. "Activating code N.E.O.N" Aelita said. Suddenly the entire tower became in gulped in a white light. Aelita woke up in a deactivated tower wondering what had happened. Aelita wondered to herself if it was all a dream then she looked in her right hand was a small dagger. She contacted Jeremie not long after. "Jeremie im so glad I your ok" said Aelita. "Why what happened Aelita". "I went to a future where XANA had taken all control of everything". "That's impossible you've been her the whole time". Then what about this" She became cut off when she noticed that the dagger was gone. "Repeat that Aelita" said Jeremie a bit confused. "Oh it's nothing Jeremie". So as the weeks went by XANA attacked and lost. But one day Jeremie contacts Aelita. She asks him how his day was. "It was fine Aelita. We got a new student today" Jeremie said as he took out his homework. "What is their name Jeremie" said Aelita. "His name was Night strange name huh" Jeremie said giggling to himself. "Aelita stood there frozen, petrified with shock. "Could it have been all true" Thought Aelita

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Part 2: New Kid, Strange Secrets

The weeks passed since the new kid Night showed up at school. He was an exceptionally smart kid, not only smart but vastly superior in strength. He didn't make any friends at school and a lot of kids talked to him but he seemed to avoid them. He got a room about down the hall near Jeremie's room. Jeremie tried to see if it was just another X.A.N.A. attack but Aelita felt no pulsations. He always stayed late in school at night. Jeremie usually sees him running across the court yard with his backpack.

"Aelita are you sure there are no pulsations in Lyoko" Jeremie asked wondering to himself. "No Jeremie for the final time there are no pulsations in Lyoko, there haven't been for quite some time now" Aelita said countering Jeremie's question. But Jeremie was still not convinced.

Tomorrow at school. Odd bumped into Night in the hallways while trying to rush to class before the bell. Odd fell backwards dropping his backpack on the floor. "Let me help you with that" Night said to odd as he extended his hand to help Odd up. "Sorry about bumping into you". "It's completely my fault" Odd said to Night as he handed Odd his backpack. "Well I got to get to class now so ill see ya later ok". "Sure Night".

Odd later met up with the gang in the cafeteria for lunch. Odd later brought up that he talked with Night earlier that day in the hallway. Jeremie burst out of his seat asking Odd "what did he say". "Nothin jer he was pretty nice to me". "Jeremie don't you think your being a bit paranoid" answered Ulrich. Night entered the room carrying his back pack on his left shoulder. Odd shouted "Hey Night over here". Night proceeded over to the table they were sitting at and began to stare at Jeremie. Night then turned to Odd and said "Don't forget to feed Kiwi today Odd. And Yumi you forgot your English book today in class". He reached into his backpack and pulled out Yumi's English book. Odd said "Thanks Night for reminding me". They all went back to their rooms for sleep.

When Ulrich passed by his room the door was slightly ajar enough to see what's inside. He saw Night with no shirt on and wearing black leather gloves hitting a punching bag he brought in a few days ago. He was punching it but it wasn't moving. His punches so fast, swift and on target. Once he stopped he looked at the bag and it came apart. Night quickly looked back but Ulrich was already in his room.

Later that night Jeremie called Ulrich. "WHAT! X.A.N.A attacking"! "Well be right there". Minutes later they arrived at the factory. "You're going to the mountain region" Jeremie said over the loudspeaker. Odd, Ulrich and Yumi entered the scanners and were virtualized into Lyoko. "Head north you'll find Aelita waiting near the tower". Ulrich, Yumi and Odd rushed over there in a split second finding Aelita being chased by three blocks. "Don't worry Aelita were here now" said Ulrich. "Odd look out behind you". Cannon knocked him out from behind. "Darn". Odd launched back one of his laser arrows back at the cannon destroying it. Ulrich quickly used triplicate to destroy two of the three blocks but was devirutaulized by the third. A cannon fired at Yumi but she threw her fan at its center destroying it but was devirutaulized after getting hit. Then Odd ran at the block firing a laser arrow at it destroying it. Then out of nowhere Odd was hit from behind by another cannon and was devirutaulized. "No! Aelita!" yelled Jeremie. The cannon was about to fire. But just before it did a hand came out strait from the center of the cannon. Everyone stared shocked at the screen wondering who had destroyed the cannon. A figure stood inside of the smoke wearing a cloak with a hood. "Aelita what just happened" said Jeremie. Aelita looked back and saw a figure pointing to the tower.

"Aelita activate code LYOKO" said Jeremie. Aelita entered the tower activating code LYOKO. "Return to the past now" said Jeremie. Since everything went back to normal and XANA went back to sleep the day went back to normal. School started as normal as it could except Night came late to class wearing a bandage over his right arm. The teacher took one look at his hand and said "Night what happened to your hand". "It was nothing just hurt my hand a bit from a project I was working on last night". "Well then please take a seat". He took a seat near the back of the room and took out a book. He opened the book to the first page. And his hand began to glow with a strange symbol. Could he know something?

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Part 3: Strange Ally

Jeremie:

XANA continued to attack from time to time but the hood figure didn’t show up to much at times. I’ve been continuing on the anti virus program for Aelita to safely visit our world. Night continued from time to time talk to us but not really hang out. And even in XANA attacks he would usually disappear without a trace.

Outside of the gym. “So what ya working on Jeremie another program for Aelitaâ€

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Part 4: Intertwined Futures

Jeremie:

Night was discovered to be the hooded figure the entire time saving Aelita from XANA. He was the one who fought to protect the world in the future from XANA. Night has been assisting me with the anti virus program for Aelita’s safe trip into the real world. And with his futuristic knowledge it will be a great deal of help to me. He has showed me a way to advance certain skills among Lyoko.

Gym class: Night had transferred from his gym class to Ulrich and Odds. Jim came out with a soccer ball in his left hand. Today you will practice in offensive and defensive tactics in soccer. “I still don’t trust him Odd there’s just something about him that’s not rightâ€

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Part 5: Final Showdown

Jeremie returned back to class giving the teacher the note that Night had given him before he left the school. “Hey Jer, where’s Nightâ€

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Part 6: Collection

After Night fainted from the fight with XANA they brought him back to Jeremie’s room. Yumi brought a first aid form her house incase anything were to happen during a XANA attack. Jeremie opened the door to his room with Yumi, Aelita, Ulrich and Night who was still unconscious behind him. He rushed open the door. “Put him on my bedâ€

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Part 7: Rebirth

It was late at Night in Jeremie’s room. Aelita had woken up by a startling noise that seemed to be coming from outside. She took off the covers of the bed and got up. She looked beside her and noticed that Jeremie was not sleeping in the other bed adjacent to her. She looked out side of the window straight down for anything that could cause a noise such as that. She saw Night downstairs sitting in front of Jeremie as Jeremie typed on his laptop about a few feet in front of Night. She quickly snagged the robe on the side of her bed (F.Y.I. the robe was given by Night to Jeremie and from Jeremie to Aelita). She walked downstairs holding her robe so it would not fall off as she walked down the stairs. She stepped in front of the door to the dormitories. She quietly opened the door and slowly walked out. “She walked over right behind Jeremie who was still typing on the computer. “Up late I see Jeremieâ€

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Part 8: Last Effort

Jeremie and Aelita ran down a road somewhere near the school with XANA chasseing them from behind. Because of XANA’s enormous size he still stayed a good distance away from them but still closing in from behind. “Hurry Aelitaâ€

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Part 9: Recoil

Another figure appeared from the shadows of a nearby tree. His face resembled XANA from their previous encounter but something was so different about him. Aelita ducked behind “Night and said “Oh no XANA.â€

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Part 10: Commentary

Edward (Portuquese)

Edward: So how did you guys like it.

Ulrich: I thought it was alright

Yumi: Good story but you could have done better.

Jeremie: I liked, it’s not that bad. What did you think Aelita?

Aelita: It was an excellent story. It had a lot of funny things and action but was also very

sad to read.

Edward: What did you think Night?

Night: …

Edward: Night say something.

Night: What the hell you killed me, I didn’t want to die Ed. (Night takes the script and

bashes Edward over the head).

Edward: I thought I would be more dramatic and a huge impact on the characters.

Night: Why didn’t you just kill Zero and XANA and leave it at that.

Zero XANA: Yeah. Wait what?

Ulrich: It really got good when you told Sissy about the whole diary thing.

Sissy: What’s that suppose to mean Ulrich.

Night: Relax Sissy I would never read anything from your diary. No matter how much I

would have been paid.

Sissy: (Whew I thought I was in trouble) her thoughts.

Night: Like what it says on page 36 right here. (Night takes out Sissy’s diary and points

to a page in the middle of the book.

Sissy: Hey give me that. (Sissy yanks the book out of Night’s hands)

Everyone: (Laughs)

Edward: I’ve got one question for you Aelita and Jeremie. Did anything happened that

night.

Jeremie: What night?

Night: You know that night when you two were alone together.

Aelita: No, nothing happened if that’s what you’re thinking.

Edward: Ok, ok. Just asking.

Edward: But you know that the story isn’t over yet. There is an extended ending to the

series Corrupted Code.

Night: There is more to this story. There was an extended

ending to the one that was placed in chapter nine where I died.

Edward: Yep, it relates to the original story that Night was first to be written in a way. It

was called “Trials of Perfectionâ€

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Part 11: Reunion

After about a day of Night’s death they journeyed into Night room. The received a key from Night before his death and XANA’s second attack. It was early in the morning where about half of the school was still pretty much asleep in their beds. Yumi came over to join in to what everyone was doing. They were going to enter Night’s room to see if they could find out anything about Night as to more information on his life. Everyone crept up to the door still trying to stay undetected by Jim still sound asleep in his room. It was Jeremie first, Aelita second, Yumi third, Ulrich fourth and Odd last. Jeremie slid the key that was held firmly in his hand. He slowly pushed in the key trying not to make much of a sound to alarm anyone else. Jeremie turned the key counter clockwise and pulled the key out. The door slid open slowly and a rush of light came in from the room. They first noticed the laptop, which was still on even after all this time, nested in the corner of the room. Jeremie walked over and started to search through the computer trying to find anything of use. Odd sat on the bed and felt that the mattress was so comfortable, nothing like the ones the school provides. The sheets were a drawing of people and a beast that seamed as if he could rise out from the bed. The symbol that was scared on Night’s hand was on the imprint on top of the creatures head. “Ah ha, found it,â€

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sorry to sound like a total party pooper but you have to link your story somehow

All fanfics must be linked to and not posted directly to the forum. This is for a number of reasons; the main one being size-consumption. (When a person just wants to see the latest post, but has to scroll past a huge fanfic just to do so, it's kind of annoying.) Another reason has to do with the rating. Because this forum is open to anyone for viewing, posting a fanfic directly onto the board that contains things that children shouldn't look at is as much against the rules as cussing in a normal post. NOTE: All thread-authors that do not comply with this rule will be given a warning to edit their posts; if they go for two days without doing as such, the thread will be locked. Two-time offenders will not be allowed to post fanfiction anymore.

[Portuquese offline]

What in all of them or in certain chapters and efine more of your meaninig

[MY85 offline]

What in all of them or in certain chapters and efine more of your meaninig

He meant for you to link the entire story. You have maximum two days for doing that (host it on fanfiction.net, LiveJournal, etc) or the thread gets locked.

[Star Way]

What in all of them or in certain chapters and efine more of your meaninig

He meant for you to link the entire story. You have maximum two days for doing that (host it on fanfiction.net, LiveJournal, etc) or the thread gets locked.

In this case I'd even be inclined to delete it, just because it's so long...

I don't mean to be rude, Portuguese, but you really should read the rules.

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One problem though, can you please tell me how to delete the messages i already posted, there was nothing i can find on the rules for deleting previous posts and I dont seem to be able to find a delte button anywhere so please tell me where i can find one

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Star Way will probably do this on her own. more reason for you to get the posts copied now before they are gone

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Two days... locky time.