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Postby Little Vili » Wed Jun 01, 2005 7:51 pm

Trillinka wrote:The next chapter will be up soon, I promise! I'm just waiting for an email reply from one of my readers. This is going to be a HUGE chapter compared to my others, promise. I think it's... 5 typed pages? I'll have to check on that. It was one of my favorites to write. Now I have to baby-sit so see you later!


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Postby Trillinka » Wed Jun 01, 2005 11:01 pm

New chapter is up! 5 typed pages!!! I must be going crazy to let you guys have that much at a time!!
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Postby Trillinka » Fri Jul 08, 2005 12:23 pm

Newest chapter is now up! It's not too long, but I thought you guys needed something after waiting so patiently! [url] http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1955549/50/
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Postby Alex » Fri Jul 08, 2005 12:30 pm

I read it already... great chapter. I think it would have been better if when Jason interrupted Ulrich and Yumi, they were going to crash into a rock or something. Would have been hilarious. (I'll leave a review soon.

BTW, did you get a chance to read CL: CU yet?
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Postby Trillinka » Fri Jul 08, 2005 12:33 pm

I was thinking of that, but decided that I didn't want too much comic relief to go into that scene, which was one that emotions were focused on.

I have not yet gotten to your story. Leave me a link? I should be home Sunday so maybe I'll get to start reading it
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Postby Alex » Fri Jul 08, 2005 12:38 pm

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[EDIT] 14 is now up! ^_^
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Postby Little Vili » Tue Jul 12, 2005 8:56 pm

Trillinka wrote:I was thinking of that, but decided that I didn't want too much comic relief to go into that scene, which was one that emotions were focused on.

I have not yet gotten to your story. Leave me a link? I should be home Sunday so maybe I'll get to start reading it


Tril...Im going to try real hard to get to your fic, but I cant make promises. Fanfic hasnt been a part of my life for a month now. Though sometimes, I do get the urge to read them. I just cant find time.
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Postby Trillinka » Tue Jul 12, 2005 9:47 pm

Don't worry about reading it right away, Vili. It's not going anywhere unless ff.net decides to be evil. No hurry! :)
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Postby Trillinka » Sat Aug 06, 2005 9:20 pm

Newest chapter is now up! It's hard to believe BCH is 1 year old! :bday:

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Postby G-Force » Sun Aug 07, 2005 2:34 am

Now here's a pleasent surprise. I didn't expect you to be here considering your un-1337 busy schedual Ms. 700+ reviews. The pleasure is all ours :D

Seeing all the UPDATE, UPDATE! messages on your review board kinda makes me happy that I don't have that many rabid fans at my doorstep. Awesome job keeping them at bay with the literary stick.

Also folks let's not forget that BCH is a super slight Retelling crossover. ACCs from the Retelling Series have found their way in the story and are causing havok with the regular cast. Course I trust Tia's subpurb skills in handling them, she's way more than capable with this task.
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Postby Little Vili » Mon Aug 08, 2005 9:28 pm

Much agreed g-force...she has done a great job of portraying how they would act in their given situations.
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Postby Trillinka » Tue Nov 29, 2005 1:14 am

Finally... FINALLY I've updated! Chapter 53.. that's right, 53! is titled Revenge. Check it out and let me know what you think!

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1955549/53/
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Postby MY85 » Tue Nov 29, 2005 1:18 am

*noticed Trillinka logged in for the only reason to publish an update* That move was pretty obvious... *clicks link*
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Postby Trillinka » Tue Nov 29, 2005 1:20 am

Hey now! I didn't log in to just post the link, I've been checking out the other boards, catching up some. I've been bogged down by life and it finally let me go and my computer is finally working well. And I kind of *cough* forgot my password for a while *sheepish look* I promise I'll be around more!!!! I just have to find a good topic to get posting on! Any suggestions?
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Postby MY85 » Tue Nov 29, 2005 1:25 am

Well, I've noticed you posted Chapter 53 without posting 52... oh, you forgot your password, sorry to hear that. BTW, I'm on Chapter 32 (too much to read, time isn't something I have) and I'll leave a review on some chapters I liked, if it's ok with you.

Good LF threads? Too many threads since you returned, but...

Big Kids Only - Show your face (it's surprising)... other threads, etc.
General Discussion (can't tell you a good one)
CL Discussion - Most of the threads....

Edit: Just left a review on Chapter 16.
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Postby Trillinka » Tue Nov 29, 2005 1:30 am

Chapter 32, hm? I should go back and re-read my own story, might be fun! :P Feel free to leave as many reviews as you'd like! I'd love to have your input!

Thanks for the suggestions, I'll take a look around and find one or two to jump into!
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Postby Ransomed_Heart » Tue Nov 29, 2005 7:49 am

Trillinka wrote:Finally... FINALLY I've updated! Chapter 53.. that's right, 53! is titled Revenge. Check it out and let me know what you think!

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1955549/53/


*Squeals* Yay! I already reviewed it ^_^.
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Postby Trillinka » Tue Nov 29, 2005 9:03 am

Yay! I'm trying to reply to most of the reviewers who had more to say than "liked it, update soon!" I am liking ff.net's reply to reviewer thingy!
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Postby Star Way » Tue Nov 29, 2005 3:23 pm

I noticed they had added that feature... Nice to see that they're at least trying to be tolerable. Maybe I'll move my fics back over there some day.

...Not that any of that information is pertinent to your thread. Heh.
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Postby Trillinka » Tue Nov 29, 2005 8:34 pm

The review thing does deal with this thread! I did bring up that topic, you know! :P So far, I've been trying to reply to any review that showed more depth than "Like it, update soon!" If there is something to say in a reply, then I'll reply :P
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Postby Odd22 » Tue Nov 29, 2005 10:17 pm

Sorry I dont relly care for the other one my favorite of yours is behind closed hearts. That has been a story on fanfiction for a while, it is also one of my favorites.
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Postby Trillinka » Tue Nov 29, 2005 10:28 pm

Not a lot of people do like Never Give Up... It was my first fanfic so I'm not overly surprised or concerned. I'm quite pleased with the response BCH is getting... I WILL reach the 1,000 review mark!!!! :D I'm glad you like it, Odd22!
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Postby Odd22 » Tue Nov 29, 2005 10:31 pm

I have always liked it, i swear it was in the rated R section (back in the day), then you switch it to T.
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Postby Trillinka » Tue Nov 29, 2005 11:42 pm

I rate it high to cover my butt ^_^ I recently upped the rating to M for some upcoming chapters. Want a little spoiler?
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Postby HvonM » Tue Nov 29, 2005 11:51 pm

I just reviewed your most recent chapter, Trillinka. Outstanding job.

A spoiler? YES, PLEASE! (Of course, I'm speaking only for myself...)
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