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The Hundredth Day

Postby Alex » Fri Jan 13, 2006 1:01 am

[New story in under an hour FTW]

New oneshot from me; it's also a songfic. Jeremie’s lost the thing most dear to him. And he’s tired of coping.

It's not exceptionally long, but I thought it was good at the time... it was literally a spur-of-the-moment idea. I thought of it, and I had some time... and there it is.

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Enjoy... reviews appreciated, and/or feel free to stick comments here.
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Postby KayLenny#7 » Fri Jan 13, 2006 1:08 am

That was so awesome! A very original idea!
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Postby Skysong » Sat Jan 14, 2006 4:49 pm

I was a little iffy when I started reading this, because... yeah... it's a songfic where everyone dies. Lots of people would overdo it, but I didn't find that anything was too melodramatic or unbelievable. And the ending was a stroke of genius.

Basically, great fic. I'd review it properly, but I don't wanna clump my windows. XD
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Postby 5188148 » Sun Jan 22, 2006 1:16 am

That almost made me cry *bizznot who nevers cries at literature*

That last bit was excellent. Keep it up
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Postby Alex » Thu Apr 20, 2006 8:04 am

Just wanted to make a note that, while the official sequel, Into the Light is on its way, Evil Jeremy has taken it upon himself to make the sequel himself as he asked permission to do some weeks ago. Here it is: The Thousandth Day
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Postby Agent_Marquez » Thu Apr 20, 2006 12:46 pm

*just read The Hundreth Day*

Songfic, eh? I thought those were forbidden in ff.net, but you did a good job to cover your songfic by making Jeremie listen to a song. Very clever from your part. But I felt it should take something a bit more stronger to get Jeremie into suicide. Although, the hair of pieces can be used for materialization again.
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Postby Lyokian Destiny » Thu Apr 20, 2006 12:47 pm

...............AWESOME STORY MAN. Yup I liked it when you first put it on FF.Net and I still like it now.
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Postby Alex » Tue Jun 27, 2006 8:54 pm

Hi, everyone. After my LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONG absence both from FFN and from here, I have a prize: the first chapter of the sequel to The Hundredth Day. It's called Into The Light, and may or may not be a songfic when I'm finished with it. Suffice it to say that it's still in progress.

[EDIT] Here's the link! Enjoy: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3008590/1/
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