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Tekirai wrote:Ya might be better off linking those, cuz.
This is a pretty good sprite comic. Just a few quirks, though. Your panels aren't evenly placed and the lines that divide them aren't thick enough. It might be better to give the boxes black borders but have a little space between each one, say about 2 or 3 pixels thick for both the borders and the spaces. It's so much neater that way and looks a lot better. (Trust me, if I don't point this out someone else will. And you don't want it to be someone who's easily angered by things like this...) Might be better to only show what's needed in your frames too. (eg. in comic #3, the last two frames could be cut a bit at the top because there's no need to see the trees again- they aren't important anymore now that we've seen the ship explode)
It's also hard to read the red text in the first box in the first comic. Maybe you could put it in a speech bubble with no 'pointy thing' and fill it with a creamish colour so you can't confuse it with a normal speech bubble, like in the 4th comic. You can't read the 'insanity' in 'Shadow Insanity' at the top of the comics either- I'd use the same font that 'Shadow' uses at least.
I suggest putting the name and number of each comic in the top right side of the image for easy 'navigation' if someone is looking at them. And Tom Bone further to the right where it is. Might wanna add something like 'Idea (C)' there too. x3 [/personal preference because Tekirai is a nutcase]
Also, the quality in #3 is scary. D: I would fix that if you can. Otherwise, it's very good! ^^ Keep it up!
Sprite comics are what you would call an 'odd job' for someone like me. But I'm an odd person. Hahahaha. o_o;;;
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